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ethanol fuel cannot be a proper replacement for gasoline

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The article chiefly states that ethanol fuel cannot be a proper replacement for gasoline and it bolsters this idea with several reasons. In contrast, the lecturer contends that this mentality is completely debatable, citing three diverse reasons to contradict the points made in the reading passage. First, the text specifies that ethanol, like gasoline, releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and consequently it would not help to solve global warming. Conversely, it is stated by the speaker that although ethanol releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, while it burns as fuel like ethanol is made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, those plants will absorb carbon dioxide from the atmosphere as they grow and this removal of CO2 would help to solve the global warming problem. Furthermore, it is emphasized in the reading that the production of a significant amount of ethanol fuel from plants would decrease the amount of these sources for uses other than fuel. Nevertheless, the professor casts doubt on this point by stating that ethanol is made from cellulose, which is not animal food. Using this not-eaten inedible substance cannot lead to any problem for other uses other than fuel. Finally, the article makes it clear that the real price of ethanol is much more than its current one because the government helps the producers by tax subsidies that lower the price. On the contrary, it is mentioned by the speaker that, in the future, the price of ethanol will decrease because of an increase in production. If the production number increases by three times, the price of ethanol will drop by forty percent and the government can remove its assistance without any stress.
The article
chiefly
states that
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ethanol
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fuel
cannot be a proper replacement for gasoline and it bolsters this
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idea
with several reasons.
In contrast
, the lecturer contends that this mentality is completely debatable, citing three diverse reasons to contradict the points made in the reading passage.
First
, the text specifies that
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ethanol
, like gasoline, releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and
consequently
it would not
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help
to solve global warming.
Conversely
, it
is stated
by the speaker that although
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ethanol
releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, while it burns as
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fuel
like
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ethanol
is made
from plants such as corn and sugar cane, those plants will absorb carbon dioxide from the atmosphere as they grow and this removal of CO2 would
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help
to solve the global warming problem.
Furthermore
, it
is emphasized
in the reading that the production of a significant amount of
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ethanol
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fuel
from plants would decrease the amount of these sources for
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uses
other than
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fuel
.
Nevertheless
, the professor casts doubt on this point by stating that
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ethanol
is made
from cellulose, which is not animal food. Using this not-eaten inedible substance cannot lead to any problem for other
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uses
other than
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fuel
.
Finally
, the article
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makes
it
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clear
that the real
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price
of
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ethanol
is much more than its
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current
one
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because
the
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government
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helps
the producers by tax subsidies that lower the
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price
.
On the contrary
, it
is mentioned
by the speaker that, in the future, the
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price
of
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ethanol
will decrease
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because
of an increase in production. If the production number increases by three times, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of
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ethanol
will drop by forty percent and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can remove its assistance without any
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stress
.
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IELTS essay ethanol fuel cannot be a proper replacement for gasoline

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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