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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is highly thought that focusing on your goals at work is the most important task and that relationships between workers are less relevant. From my point of view, I certainly disagree. I believe that friendly atmospheres at working places improve the conditions that allow workers meet their goals. In this essay I will give some examples. When you feel confident to talk with your colleagues you can solve issues extremely faster, if you talk with your coworker often you can identify what their abilities are and additionally it will be easier to ask for help. For example, in my previous work I knew who was good at designing electrical schematics and who was the expert at programming industrial controllers so this let me reach them accordingly to their expertises when I was a new entry. This allowed me to finish my activities in less time and study some other topics for work. Furthermore, when good communication exists obstacles can be prevented. Sometimes people don not talk about their error committed because they don not want to let others know their faults. If you feel confident to inform issues before they become bigger, you will prevent catastrophic events. For example, one current colleague mistakenly installed a different device at a manufacturing plant which eventually was going to damage the whole system an generate big losses of money. He realized about this some days after it and he decided to talk with his boss who supported him to correct the mistake in a faster way. To summarize, I think that the goals at workplaces are not the primary thing you have to pay attention at. When you are in a good environment you are more prone to succeed with your activities. It is highly thought that focusing on your goals at work is the most important task and that relationships between workers are less relevant. From my point of view, I certainly disagree. I believe that friendly atmospheres at working places improve the conditions that allow workers meet their goals. In this essay I will give some examples. When you feel confident to talk with your colleagues you can solve issues extremely faster, if you talk with your coworker often you can identify what their abilities are and additionally it will be easier to ask for help. For example, in my previous work I knew who was good at designing electrical schematics and who was the expert at programming industrial controllers so this let me reach them accordingly to their expertises when I was a new entry. This allowed me to finish my activities in less time and study some other topics for work. Furthermore, when good communication exists obstacles can be prevented. Sometimes people don not talk about their error committed because they don not want to let others know their faults. If you feel confident to inform issues before they become bigger, you will prevent catastrophic events. For example, one current colleague mistakenly installed a different device at a manufacturing plant which eventually was going to damage the whole system an generate big losses of money. He realized about this some days after it and he decided to talk with his boss who supported him to correct the mistake in a faster way. To summarize, I think that the goals at workplaces are not the primary thing you have to pay attention at. When you are in a good environment you are more prone to succeed with your activities.

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activities
. It is highly
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thought
 that focusing on your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goals
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 is the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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workers
 are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfewer
less
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 disagree. I believe that friendly atmospheres at working places This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the conditions that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goals
. In this essay I will give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 examples.

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feel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withself-assuredsureboldpositivesanguinehopeful
confident
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecture
talk
 with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomradeteammatebuddyassistantaidefriend
colleagues
 you can solve You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issues
extremely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrapidagilebrisknimblehotquick
faster
, if you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecture
talk
 with your coworker This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
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 it will be easier to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. For You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasepatternsymbolobjectillustrationpart
example
, in my previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 I knew You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 at designing electrical schematics and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 was the expert at programming industrial controllers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me reach them accordingly
 to their expertises when I was a new entry. This This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 me to finish my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfewer
less
 time and study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 topics for work.

Furthermore
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good
 communication exists obstacles can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
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people
Did you mean “do not”?do not
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talk
 about their error committed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they Did you mean “do not”?do not
don not
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 others know their faults. If you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionatmospheremoodtouchaurasense
feel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withself-assuredsureboldpositivesanguinehopeful
confident
 to inform You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issues
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they become bigger, you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 catastrophic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. For You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasepatternsymbolobjectillustrationpart
example
, one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomradeteammatebuddyassistantaidefriend
colleague
mistakenly
 installed a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 device at a manufacturing plant which eventually
 was going to damage the whole system Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
an
 generate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 losses of money. He realized about this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 days after Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 he decided to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecture
talk
 with his boss You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 supported him to correct the mistake in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrapidagilebrisknimblehotquick
faster
 way.

To summarize
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goals
 at workplaces are not the primary thing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay attention at. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 you are in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 environment you are more prone to succeed with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. 