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Describe your favourite photo

Well, I am extremely fond of taking photographs. I frequently take photographs. I click pictures whenever I feel cute, whenever I get ready to go somewhere like party or marriage. Today, I would like to share about my favourite picture. So, when I was in college, me and my friends went to resturant. My friend clicked my picture with the bulb, it comes out to be dazzling. I wore black shirt and pant at that time. Lighting was just dazzling. Moreover, I posted that picture on social media. I got very good comments. I also hang my that picture in my bed room with beautiful frame.
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extremely
fond of taking photographs. I
frequently
take photographs. I click
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pictures
whenever I feel cute, whenever I
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get
ready to go somewhere like party or marriage.
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Today
, I would like to share about my
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picture
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So
, when I was in college, me and my friends went to
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resturant
. My friend clicked my
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picture
with the bulb, it
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comes
out to be dazzling. I wore black shirt and pant at that time. Lighting was
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just
dazzling.
Moreover
, I posted that
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picture
on social media. I
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got
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very
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good
comments. I
also
hang my that
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picture
in my
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with
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beautiful
frame.
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IELTS essay Describe your favourite photo

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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