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Essay topics: TPO-43 - Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake v.2

Essay topics: TPO-43 - Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake v. 2
Under the circumstances described in the issue, I would definitely prefer to talk the leader after the end of the meeting because this approach has no glaring disadvantages but has serious advantages over other proposed options. The reasons on which my prospect is based will be discussed in details below. Firstly, my opinion about a mistake may be incorrect and in order not to be ashamed I would prefer to wait till the end of the meeting and then discuss my viewpoint on the issue with the speaker. There are several possibilities, for instance, I might misunderstand speaker' s words, I may have a wrong opinion which is based on obsolete information or, of course, the leader may be mistaken as well. Due to those options it is reasonable and wise to take a time and discuss the supposed mistake without people. Secondly, the second option is better because it will not inevitably lead to spoiling relationships with the speaker or undermining his authority. By discussing the problem without witnesses the position of the leader will not be compromised. By contrast, interrupting the speaker in the middle of the meeting in front of the public who ought to obey his rule will definitely subvert the leader' s authority and it may lead to a change in the leader' s attitude to the person who corrected him. It is needless to say that this is undesirable outcome for the person who works under the leader because of conspicuous reasons. Finally, keep silence is not a good option either because the leader may be unaware about the mistake but in some cases saying nothing may lead to grave and dire consequences for the speaker and even for the success of the company. For instance, we all heart about debacle of Samsung’s Note 7 smartphone, it is believed that one of the reason of the commercial disaster is stiff hierarchical structure of Korean society when employees are terrified to openly talk up to the boss and saying nothing about the mistake in the design led to the millions of dollars in losses. At the same time, having a conversation about the mistake may have easily annihilated the possible negative outcome for the corporation. Thus it is not only an option but a duty to talk to a responsible person about a noticed mistake. Due to aforementioned ground, approaching of a meeting leader after the meeting is the most attractive, beneficial and reasonable option among ones which were stated in the issue.
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described
in the issue, I would definitely prefer to talk the
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end
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meeting
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because
this approach has no glaring disadvantages
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but
has serious advantages over other proposed
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options
. The reasons on which my prospect
is based
will
be discussed
in
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details
below.

Firstly
, my opinion about a
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mistake
may be incorrect and in order not to
be ashamed
I would prefer to wait till the
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end
of the
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meeting
and then discuss my viewpoint on the issue with the speaker. There are several possibilities,
for instance
, I might misunderstand
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speaker&
#039; s words, I may have a
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wrong
opinion which
is based
on obsolete information or,
of course
, the
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leader
may
be mistaken
as well
. Due to those
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options
it is reasonable and wise to take a time and discuss the supposed
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mistake
without
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people
.

Secondly
, the second
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option
is better
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because
it will not
inevitably
lead to spoiling relationships with the speaker or undermining his authority. By discussing the problem without witnesses the position of the
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leader
will not
be compromised
. By contrast, interrupting the speaker in the middle of the
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meeting
in front of the public who ought to obey his
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rule
will definitely subvert the
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leader&
#039; s authority and it may lead to a
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change
in the
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leader&
#039; s attitude to the person who corrected him. It is needless to say that this is undesirable outcome for the person who works under the
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leader
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because
of conspicuous reasons.

Finally
,
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keep
silence is not a
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good
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option
either
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because
the
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leader
may be unaware about the
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mistake
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but
in
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some
cases saying nothing may lead to grave and dire consequences for the speaker and even for the success of the
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company
.
For instance
, we all heart about debacle of Samsung’s Note 7 smartphone, it
is believed
that one of the reason of the commercial disaster is stiff hierarchical structure of Korean society when employees
are terrified
to
openly
talk up to the boss and saying nothing about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
in the design led to the millions of dollars in losses. At the same time, having a conversation about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
may have
easily
annihilated the possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
outcome for the corporation.
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Thus
it is not
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only
an
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option
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but
a duty to talk to a responsible person about a noticed mistake.

Due to aforementioned ground, approaching of a
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meeting
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leader
after the
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meeting
is the most attractive, beneficial and reasonable
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option
among ones which
were stated
in the issue.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Essay topics: TPO-43 - Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
418 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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