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Essay topics: TPO-33 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on pro v.1

Essay topics: TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on pro v. 1
Some people say that youth should do what exactly the elderly people's experience, while others believe that it's better to think about the old people point of view and then make some new decisions. The essay argues about both of the ideas, but the writer fully advocates the second one. Life is no longer to gain experiences from all aspects of the real world. Young people at the begging point of their period must take care of yourself and avoid some probable mistakes that they hear or learn from their parents or teachers. They should learn about financial problems and do not waste their money. Youth can get some remarkable experiences about education, work, marriage, and social behaviour from their adults. The elderly have valuable opinions about life skills and young people would prevent from potential risks and bad decisions. All in all, this experience is like a gold box for teenagers who want to live better in the future. However, life in all perspectives will change during each decade and youth can have the older people's view and then make some good and modern decisions. For example, by boosting the technology and especially the internet, youth can search something by twinkling an eye and get some new information about all issues such as lifestyles, behaviour, finance, COVID 19, and any things that they want. We actually live on the earth that most of the time we face with the new crisis like inflation, weather conditions, economic problems, any health care subjects, and so on. I mean we live in a dynamic world and things have been changed rapidly. In addition, there are some examples in the nature that both father and son were scientists and the father told her son please do not follow my way of thinking, but the son thank about the father's idea and after a while he discovered new outcomes. In conclusion, While listening to the elderly's opinion are really vital, but young people should think about it and decide modern idea.
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say that
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should do what exactly the elderly
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experience
, while others believe that it's better to
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about the
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old
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people
point of view and then
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make
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some
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new
decisions. The essay argues about both of the
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ideas
,
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but
the writer
fully
advocates the second one.

Life is no longer to gain
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experiences
from all aspects of the real world. Young
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people
at the begging point of their period
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must
take care of yourself and avoid
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some
probable mistakes that they hear or learn from their parents or teachers. They should learn about financial problems and do not waste their money.
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Youth
can
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get
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some
remarkable
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experiences
about education, work, marriage, and social
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behaviour
from their adults. The elderly have valuable opinions about life
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skills
and young
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people
would
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prevent
from potential
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risks
and
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bad
decisions. All in all, this
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experience
is like a gold box for
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teenagers
who want to
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live
better in the future.

However
, life in all perspectives will
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change
during each decade and
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youth
can have the older
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's view and then
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make
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some
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good
and modern decisions.
For example
, by boosting the technology and
especially
the internet,
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youth
can search something by twinkling an eye and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
information about all issues such as lifestyles,
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
, finance,
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID 19
, and any things that they want. We actually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
on the earth that most of the time we face with the
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new
crisis like inflation, weather conditions, economic problems, any health care subjects, and
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so
on. I mean we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a dynamic world and things have been
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changed
rapidly
.
In addition
, there are
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some
examples in the nature that both father and son were scientists and the father
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told
her son
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please
do not follow my way of thinking,
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but
the son thank about the father's
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idea
and after a while he discovered
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new
outcomes.

In conclusion
, While listening to the elderly's opinion are
really
vital,
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but
young
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people
should
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think
about it and decide modern
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Essay topics: TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on pro v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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