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Essay extinction of certain organisms has a great impact on our environment

Essay extinction of certain organisms has a great impact on our environment q5dJX

Directly or indirectly all the living beings are dependent on one another. While some people consider that extinction of certain organisms has a great impact on our environment, others say there are much more causes for the causes in the surroundings. In this essay, I will discuss about both the views with the example. Firstly, It is not only the cause of the extinct species we re suffering with the problems. But due to our intention of creating more sophisticated life without bothering about the impact of it. For instance, telephone was invented only to connect people and convey any important message. But now, every kid and kin around the world has a mobile without knowing how it is emitting harmful radiation. Secondly, deforestation plays a vital role in creating more disasters. On a recent survey held by the scientists revealed that around 28% of the environmental disaster such as flooding, earth quakes and lack of rainfall is due to deforstatation. On the other hand, eventhough humans are the cause of major environmental problems, it cannot be denied that the extinction of certain species of plants and animals created a scar in the environment. Recent paper published by the Oxforrd university states that the sparrow bird which was once dominating the universe by helping the farmers in agriculture is now rarely seen. To conclude, I personally believe that though extinct species has created a major impact to our environment, deforestation for extending the land areas, increase in telcommunication which cause radiation and discouraging the famers play vital role for the environment isssue,

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environment
, others say there are much more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoriginmotivationmatterexplanationelementmotive
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 the views with the example.

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we re
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only
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people
 and convey any This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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now
, every kid and kin around the world has a mobile without knowing how it is emitting harmful radiation. Secondly
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scientists
 revealed that around 28% of the environmental disaster such as flooding, earth quakes and lack of rainfall is due to Possible spelling mistake found.deforestation
deforstatation
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On the other hand
, Possible spelling mistake found.even though
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cause
 of major environmental problems, it cannot be denied
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environment
. Recent paper published by the Possible spelling mistake found.Oxford
Oxforrd
 university states that the sparrow bird which was once dominating the universe by helping the farmers in agriculture is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 rarely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
.

To conclude
, I personally
 believe that though extinct species has created a major impact to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
, deforestation for extending the land areas, increase in Possible spelling mistake found.telecommunicationtel communication
telcommunication
 which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoriginmotivationmatterexplanationelementmotive
cause
 radiation and discouraging the Possible spelling mistake found.farmersframersfakerstamersflamerslamers
famers
 play vital role for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
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