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Team sports and solo sports

Team sports and solo sports 8QYEx
Sports remain a debatable topic. While some people think that team sports are more beneficial, others are in favor of solo sports. This essay aims to analyze both schools of thought and state the author’s opinion. On the one hand, there is no denying the advantages of individual sports. First, solo sports give players flexibility. They can play whenever they wish and not depend and timeable of other player. For example, a busy businessman can go swimming or walking at any time of the day without any prior arrangement. Besides, it is solo players who determine thier performance in the game. Unlike team sports where an experienced player may be limited by less skillful teammates, a golfer does not encounter the same problem. One the other hand, team sports bring many benefits to players. Multipsplayer sports give players the opportunity to practice social skills. Specifically, to win a football match, it requires teamwork ability, effective communication, and smooth collaboration between members. These skills are of utmost importance not only in sports but also in life and work. Team sports practicipants are more likely to find people with common interests, which helps them expand their social circles. People whose jobs appear to be unrelated, like a doctor and a police officer, can become friends on the football field. In conclusion, both individual and team sports have their strengths. However, I prefer individual sport because of the flexibility and productivity it offers.
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that
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are more beneficial, others are in favor of solo
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. This essay aims to analyze both schools of
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and state the author’s opinion.

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, solo
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give
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flexibility. They can play whenever they wish and not
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who determine
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thier
performance in the game. Unlike
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team
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where an experienced
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may
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by less skillful teammates, a golfer does not encounter the same problem.

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the other hand,
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bring
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benefits to
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give
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the opportunity to practice social
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, to win a football match, it requires teamwork ability, effective communication, and smooth collaboration between members. These
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are of utmost importance not
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in life and work.

Team
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practicipants
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with common interests, which
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, like a doctor and a police officer, can become friends on the football field.

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, both individual and
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have their strengths.
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, I prefer individual
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because
of the flexibility and productivity it offers.
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IELTS essay Team sports and solo sports

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
240 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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