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The two drawings are for and existing small appartment which consists of three main devisions, obviously the first one shows the ground plan with a hall in front of the main entrance, while the second is about some changes to be proposed. In the first drawing there is an entrance hall separating the house into two main parts, at left there is a kitchen, and at the right side it is a living room. Moreover, both drawings are very clear and simple from architechural point of view, however, the essential difference between them is that the entrance hall in the proposed drawing is opened to the living room which gives more sapcious areas and makes the movement inside the house easy and convenient, on the other hand, the main door of the kitchen is too big and it is better to reduce its size in order to save the space. To conclude, the suggested changes are approching the modern way of design and offering a significant convenience of movement, thus, it is good to consider the second drawing as a final one.
The two
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drawings
are for and existing
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small
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appartment
which consists of three
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main
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devisions
,
obviously
the
first
one
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shows
the ground plan with a hall in front of the
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main
entrance, while the second is about
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some
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changes
to
be proposed
.

In the
first
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drawing
there is an entrance hall separating the
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house
into two
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main
parts, at
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left
there is a kitchen, and
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at the right side
it is a living room.

Moreover
, both
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drawings
are
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very
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clear
and simple from
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architechural
point of view,
however
, the essential difference between them is that the entrance hall in the proposed
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drawing
is opened
to the living room which gives more
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sapcious
areas and
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makes
the movement inside the
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house
easy and convenient,
on the other hand
, the
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main
door of the kitchen is too
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big
and it is better to
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reduce
its size in order to save the space.

To conclude
, the suggested
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changes
are
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approching
the modern way of design and offering a significant convenience of movement,
thus
, it is
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good
to consider the second
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drawing
as a final one.
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IELTS essay essay about existing building

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4 paragraphs
182 words
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