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esponsibility of the consumer to take an initiative in lessening of the packaging while other say that it is job of supermarket while  that the amount of packaging should be reduced at the initial stage as in production and dealership stages i belive  the responsibility to protect the environment should not fall upon politicians alone because ordinary citizens can make a significant contribution     on the one hand  companies need to reduce packing volume by locking they maintain the impact of the prouct on people by producing less for example muny consumer have very little awereness abaut the negitive impact that the excessive amount of product packing that is are having environment however i belive people should observe the product before purchasing it on the one hand people should buy less of the packaged product by buying packaged product people harm the environment For example in Africa the increased in packged product affected environment and many disease i belivethat the on

esponsibility of the consumer to take an initiative in lessening of the packaging while other say that it is job of supermarket while that the amount of packaging should be reduced at the initial stage as in production and dealership stages i belive the responsibility to protect the environment should not fall upon politicians alone because ordinary citizens can make a significant contribution on the one hand companies need to reduce packing volume by locking they maintain the impact of the prouct on people by producing less for example muny consumer have very little awereness abaut the negitive impact that the excessive amount of product packing that is are having environment however i belive people should observe the product before purchasing it on the one hand people should buy less of the packaged product by buying packaged product people harm the environment For example in Africa the increased in packged product affected environment and many disease i belivethat the on 5Xmp
some would argue that that it is the responsibility of the consumer to take an initiative in lessening of the packaging while other say that it is job of supermarket while  that the amount of packaging should be reduced at the initial stage as in production and dealership stages i belive  the responsibility to protect the environment should not fall upon politicians alone because ordinary citizens can make a significant contribution on the one hand  companies need to reduce packing volume by locking they maintain the impact of the prouct on people by producing less for example muny consumer have very little awereness abaut the negitive impact that the excessive amount of product packing that is are having environment however i belive people should observe the product before purchasing it on the one hand people should buy less of the packaged product by buying packaged product people harm the environment For example in Africa the increased in packged product affected environment and many disease i belivethat the only way to reduce packaging is not to buy it campanies also do not produce packaged product if people cannot afford them In conclusion, companies and individuals both need to take responsibility for the amount of packaging that is used to package goods. The government also needs to play a significant role in this issue by creating and enforcing laws that companies must adhere to with regards to plastic packaging, and by educating individuals about the environmental destruction and pollution caused by packaging waste
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that the amount of
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the responsibility to protect the
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environment
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because
ordinary citizens can
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 in Africa the increased in
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companies
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adhere to
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plastic
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packaging
, and by educating individuals about the environmental destruction and pollution caused by
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IELTS essay esponsibility of the consumer to take an initiative in lessening of the packaging while other say that it is job of supermarket while that the amount of packaging should be reduced at the initial stage as in production and dealership stages i belive the responsibility to protect the environment should not fall upon politicians alone because ordinary citizens can make a significant contribution on the one hand companies need to reduce packing volume by locking they maintain the impact of the prouct on people by producing less for example muny consumer have very little awereness abaut the negitive impact that the excessive amount of product packing that is are having environment however i belive people should observe the product before purchasing it on the one hand people should buy less of the packaged product by buying packaged product people harm the environment For example in Africa the increased in packged product affected environment and many disease i belivethat the on

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  American English
3 paragraphs
249 words
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