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Environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved or individuals can solve problems with government action.

Environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved or individuals can solve problems with government action. Vw59A
With the increase in environmental problems likes global warming and pollution, I staunchly believe that every individual should play their role with the help of government to ensure minimal damage to environment and make our world a better place to live in. To begin with, individuals can greatly contribute greatly to the environmental protection and safeguarding neighbourhood by doing it together. For instance, people can collectively boycott plastic bags which is a major threat for our environment and getting rid of single use of plastic from our daily life. For example, on criticism, many fast-food chains have replaced plastic straws with papers straws. Individuals partnering with NGO can spread awareness. Moreover, cars are the major source of air pollution as their exhaust gases contaminate the air so one should go for an electric car which is environment friendly. In addition, government should encourage the masses to purchase electric vehicle instead of fuel driven vehicle by providing subsidies. Without a doubt, government also plays a pivotal role in maintaining our environment safe and healthy. Policy-makers should emphasis on environment policies to prevent damages. With the increased in industrialization, authorities should make sure that all the industries follow’s the environmental policy norms and in case any industry found to violate the norms should be imposed with heavy fines. To conclude, solving environmental problems is not the responsibility of only government but also every individual’s contributing in one or some other way can prevent damages to our natural resources and preserve it for our future generations.
With the increase in
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environmental
problems likes global warming and pollution, I
staunchly
believe that every
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individual
should play their role with the
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help
of
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government
to ensure minimal damage to
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environment
and
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make
our world a better place to
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live
in.

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individuals
can
greatly
contribute
greatly
to the
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environmental
protection and safeguarding
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neighbourhood
by doing it together.
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,
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people
can
collectively
boycott plastic bags which is a major threat for our
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environment
and getting rid of single
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use
of plastic from our daily life.
For example
, on criticism,
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many
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fast
-food chains have replaced plastic straws with papers straws.
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Individuals
partnering with NGO can spread awareness.
Moreover
, cars are the major source of air pollution as their exhaust gases contaminate the air
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so
one should go for an electric car which is
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environment
friendly.
In addition
,
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government
should encourage the masses to
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purchase
electric vehicle
instead
of fuel driven vehicle by providing subsidies.

Without a doubt,
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government
also
plays a pivotal role in maintaining our
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environment
safe and healthy. Policy-makers should emphasis on
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environment
policies to
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prevent
damages. With the increased in industrialization, authorities should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that all the industries follow’s the
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environmental
policy norms and in case any industry found to violate the norms should
be imposed
with heavy fines.

To conclude
, solving
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environmental
problems is not the responsibility of
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only
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government
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but
also
every
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individual’s
contributing in one or
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some
other way can
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prevent
damages to our natural resources and preserve it for our future generations.
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IELTS essay Environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved or individuals can solve problems with government action.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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