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Describe a funny situation

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Every person makes happy at a one point or the other. And I am also not an exception, my life has full of many funny moments. That was a ridiculous moment that I have never forgotten in my life. I still remember the day I met a girl at my extra- course in school. She was friendly and open - minded girl to talk with me at first sight. However, I had just thought her like a normal friend rather than a special one. We joined to make the homework together from that day met. At break times, I and she used to be sit on the benches at the school yard. She took note my advisers to her assignments while I was teaching her some parts of misunderstanding. From time to time, my friend once caught the scenery and they judged us in a romantic relationship. A fair-weather friend that said to me: “Oh, I think you will alone during the life, so how you can to be like that? . . ya. . duke…”. Thereafter, I felt like a thunderbolt beside my ears, I got shy extremely. But to be camp down to laugh with him, I justified my embarrassment against him by a sentence: “You don’t know I have so much girl friends. . right? … Which girls you want to mention? “. He stared at me with an opened eyes for a while, then he didn’t say any words. Finally, the girl in this story now is happy with her work and we often contact usually. To wrap up, all bad and good memories is to make life be more beautiful, so that funny circumstance is a small bright color for me to recall back to the funny past.
Every person
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makes
happy at a one point or the other. And I am
also
not an exception, my
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life
has full of
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many
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funny
moments. That was a ridiculous moment that I have never forgotten in my
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life
. I
still
remember the day I met a
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girl
at my extra- course in school. She was friendly and open
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-
minded
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girl
to talk with me at
first
sight.
However
, I had
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just
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thought
her like a normal
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friend
rather
than a special one. We
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joined
to
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make
the homework together from that day met. At break times,
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I and
she
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used
to be
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sit
on the benches at the school yard. She took note my advisers to her assignments while I was teaching her
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some
parts of misunderstanding. From time to time, my
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friend
once caught the
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scenery and
they judged us in a romantic relationship. A
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fair
-weather
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friend
that said to me: “Oh, I
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think
you will alone during the
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life
,
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so
how you can to be like that?
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.
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.
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ya
.
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.
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duke
…”. Thereafter, I felt like a thunderbolt beside my ears, I
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got
shy
extremely
.
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But
to be camp down to laugh with him, I justified my embarrassment against him by a sentence: “You don’t know I have
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so
much
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girl
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friends
.
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.
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right
? … Which
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girls
you want to mention? “. He stared at me with an opened
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eyes
for a while, then he didn’t say any words.
Finally
, the
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girl
in this story
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now
is happy with her
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work and
we
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often
contact
usually
. To wrap up, all
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bad
and
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good
memories is to
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make
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life
be more
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beautiful
,
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so
that
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funny
circumstance is a
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small
bright color for me to recall back to the
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funny
past.
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IELTS essay Describe a funny situation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
293 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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