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environment problem and solution

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Nowadays, the issue of the environment has become a highly considerable concern. There are many adverse effects of this problem. This essay intends to analyze the reasons for this phenomenon and also suggest some possible ways to alleviate the situation. This essay will examine the main causes of the environment and possible solutions to this problem. Effect Also, suggest some possible consequences of this situation. There are two main reasons for the increasing challenges of protecting the environment. Firstly/ the first reason is that people don’t aware of the environmental damage. What I mean this is that people are cutting down trees for their needs, using too many luxuries in the house and driving too many cars and other transportation which is polluting air seriously and almost every people wasting resources like water. People would step forward in this situation if they were aware of that. Secondly- and very importantly- people are not doing anything because they think that the global problem is only government action can solve. Numerous people, for example, live in this country, if each person plants a tree and nurtures it for the first few months, the result would be unimaginable. But people don’t realize anything about the environment. Fortunately, however, there are two promising solutions to this problem. First of all, the government should inform the general population about the dangers of this problem. This way/as consequence, people will be more conscious of the environment and won’t overuse or destroy its resources. Simultaneously/furthermore, the government should be taking steps towards this current situation. In Bangladesh, for instance, there is a strict ban on the use of single-use plastics, but people are still using them. If the governments were taking action, people definitely would be aware of this.
Nowadays, the issue of the
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environment
has become a
highly
considerable concern. There are
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many
adverse effects of this
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problem
. This essay intends to analyze the reasons for this phenomenon and
also
suggest
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some
possible ways to alleviate the situation.

This essay will examine the main causes of the
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environment
and possible solutions to this problem.

Effect

Also
, suggest
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some
possible consequences of this situation.

There are two main reasons for the increasing challenges of protecting the
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environment
.
Firstly
/ the
first
reason is that
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people
don’t aware of the environmental damage. What I mean this is that
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people
are cutting down trees for their needs, using too
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many
luxuries in the
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house
and driving too
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many
cars and other transportation which is polluting air
seriously
and almost every
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people
wasting resources like water.
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People
would step forward in this situation if they were aware of that.
Secondly
- and
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very
importantly
-
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people
are not doing anything
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because
they
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think
that the global
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problem
is
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only
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government
action can solve. Numerous
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people
,
for example
,
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live
in this country, if each person plants a tree and nurtures it for the
first
few months, the result would be unimaginable.
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But
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people
don’t realize anything about the environment.

Fortunately
,
however
, there are two promising solutions to this
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problem
.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
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government
should inform the general population about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dangers
of this
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problem
. This way/as consequence,
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people
will be more conscious of the
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environment
and won’t overuse or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
its resources.
Simultaneously
/
furthermore
, the
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government
should be taking steps towards this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation. In Bangladesh,
for instance
, there is a strict ban on the
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use
of single-
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use
plastics,
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but
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people
are
still
using them. If the
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governments
were taking action,
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people
definitely would be aware of this.
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IELTS essay environment problem and solution

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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