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Write an Statement of Purpose for masters in structural engineering

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A natural attraction towards math and science led me towards engineering and my love for huge buildings and advanced structures pathed my way towards civil engineering, which also allow me to face challenges directly impacting my community. During the Bachler program, I acquired a strong foundational knowledge of the field but in the last 2 years I faced many challenges due to covid- 19 and I had to keep motivating myself to do more. The biggest thing which motivated me to study more was NPTEL courses and my Prof. at the college, Dr Ashok Dhariwal, whom I admire most in my life. He taught me not only the course curriculum in an efficient manner but also some great life lessons which I will remember throughout my life. I happened to know about NPTEL courses from my college academia. I had to get a minimum of 20 credits from its courses to get an honours degree. There I did courses on RCC, Steel, structural analysis, Geotech and advanced concrete technology. NPTEL also helped me to crack the GATE examination, as most of the knowledge I got was from these courses. Also, because of my great performance in the given courses, NPTEL gave me an opportunity to do a summer internship under any professor of my choice from prestigious IIT’s. I did an 8-week summer internship under Prof. D. N. Singh where I learnt a lot about research work and made my plan to take research work after my Bachler degree. During the internship, I read a lot of different published papers, attended virtual meetings (where all the fellow researchers and interns used to discuss some topic and valuable feedback was given), some international meetings and gained a lot of knowledge from every individual with whom I interacted. I learned how research is conducted and how one has to think and work to excel in this field. My inclination towards Reinforced concrete and Structural analysis guided me to continue my education in the structural engineering domain. Knowing theoretical work and being keenly interested to learn the research work which will assist me in the future, this MSR program will play a pioneer in my career as my knowledge in this area is limited. Now, I want to do my research on the topic - Reliability of structures. I want to become an entrepreneur and want to set my journey's foundation with good research work, making my ultimate goal to innovate new tools and technology on which I will do my business. I am applying for IIT Kanpur on an account of its excellent research facilities combined with distinguished and dedicated faculty. My admission into your esteemed institution is of paramount importance for my career. With my theoretical knowledge and practical skill, I am well equipped to meet your expectations. I am confident that I would surely synchronize to your standard. I want to be guided under Prof. Sudib Kumar Mishra and Prof. Sudhir Mishra as I am fascinated by their pedagogy and believe that they can guide me to become my best. Since I strongly believe that your university would be an ideal place for me to pursue my graduate studies, I wish to canalize my knowledge and make my life significant by joining your university.
A natural attraction towards math and science led me towards engineering and my
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love
for huge buildings and advanced structures
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pathed
my way towards civil engineering, which
also
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allow
me to face challenges
directly
impacting my community. During the
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Bachler
program, I acquired a strong foundational
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knowledge
of the field
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but
in the last 2 years I faced
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many
challenges due to
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
- 19 and I had to
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keep
motivating myself to do more. The biggest thing which motivated me to study more was
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NPTEL
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courses
and my
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Prof
. at the college, Dr Ashok
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Dhariwal
, whom I admire most in my life. He taught me not
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only
the
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course
curriculum
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in an efficient manner
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but
also
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some
great life lessons which I will remember throughout my life.

I happened to know about
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NPTEL
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courses
from my college academia. I had to
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get
a minimum of 20 credits from its
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courses
to
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get
an
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honours
degree. There I did
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courses
on RCC, Steel, structural analysis,
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Geotech
and advanced concrete technology.
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NPTEL
also
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helped
me to crack the GATE examination, as most of the
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knowledge
I
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got
was from these
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courses
.
Also
,
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because
of my great performance in the
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given
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courses
,
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NPTEL
gave me an opportunity to do a summer internship under any professor of my choice from prestigious IIT’s.

I did an 8-week summer internship under
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Prof
. D. N. Singh where I
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learnt
a lot about
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research
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work
and made my plan to take
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research
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work
after my
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Bachler
degree. During the internship, I read
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a lot of
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different
published papers, attended virtual meetings (where all the fellow researchers and interns
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used
to discuss
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some
topic and valuable feedback was
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given
),
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some
international meetings and gained
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a lot of
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knowledge
from every individual with whom I interacted. I learned how
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research
is conducted
and how one
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has to
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think
and
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work
to excel in this field.

My inclination towards Reinforced concrete and Structural analysis guided me to continue my education in the structural engineering domain. Knowing theoretical
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work
and being
keenly
interested to learn the
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research
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work
which will assist me in the future, this MSR program will play a pioneer in my career as my
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knowledge
in this area
is limited
.
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Now
, I
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want
to do my
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research
on the topic
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-
Reliability of structures.

I
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want
to become an entrepreneur and
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want
to set my journey's foundation with
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good
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research
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work
, making my ultimate goal to innovate new tools and technology on which I will do my business.

I am applying for IIT Kanpur on an account of its excellent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
facilities combined with distinguished and dedicated faculty. My admission into your esteemed institution is of paramount importance for my career. With my theoretical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
and practical
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skill
, I am
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well equipped
to
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meet
your expectations. I am confident that I would
surely
synchronize to your standard. I
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want
to
be guided
under
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Prof
.
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Sudib
Kumar Mishra and
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Prof
.
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Sudhir
Mishra as I
am fascinated
by their pedagogy and believe that they can guide me to become my best.

Since I
strongly
believe that your university would be an ideal place for me to pursue my graduate studies, I wish to canalize my
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knowledge
and
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make
my life significant by joining your university.
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IELTS essay Write an Statement of Purpose for masters in structural engineering

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
544 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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