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I have ever gone to many breathtaking. But the one I would like to tell you about is Phan Thiet. I will never forget this wonderful one-week trip with my friends during my summer vacation three years ago. Phan Thiet is a town in the province of Binh Thuan in southern Vietnam. The weather was generally quite hot when I arrived, but I was very excited because this was my first trip to Phan Thiet. There were many things that I will remember for the rest of my life. The first thing I noticed was that people are very kind, friendly, and hospitable. They are always willing to help or take care of others. Moreover, the sightseeing was stunning, and I visited several locations, including the beach and Mui Ne. Last but not least, Phan Thiet is renowned for its cuisine. I sampled a wide range of cuisines, including Banh Canh Cha Ca Phan Thiet, Com Tam Phan Thiet, and Banh Xeo. I tried them several times because they were so delicious. To summarize, it was a spectacular journey. I was completely satisfied, and I will remember it for the rest of my life, so if the opportunity arises, I will return and explore many of the city's famous landmarks once more.
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if the opportunity arises, I will return and explore
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IELTS essay visited a beautiful place

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