Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

write a story about unforgettable day

write a story about unforgettable day 2RwBj
Last summer, while I was on holiday on a Greek island, my friends and I went for a walk to the top of a beautiful whitewashed village. It was extremely hot. We spent a happy hour wandering up and down the narrow streets, and then we decided to stop at a lovely café. Just then, I tripped and fell over! “Oh no, I think I’ve twisted my ankle, ” I cried. I didn’t know how I was going to get down the hill. Then, suddenly, we heard the sound of hooves and an old man appeared on a donkey! He stopped and started speaking to me in Greek. The café owner came over and translated. “Get onto the donkey, ” he said, “and he’ll take you down the hill to the clinic in the town. ” My friends helped me onto the donkey and off we went! The doctor at the clinic strapped up my ankle and I spent the rest of my holiday happily sunbathing on the beach. How fortunate for me the old man and his donkey appeared when they did! 2 One summer day, Ahmad and his friend Habib were hiking in the mountains. They came to the banks of a fast-flowing river and they wanted to get across. Suddenly, Ahmad spotted a rope bridge a few yards away. They went to inspect it. Several of its wooden slats were missing and there was no handrail except for a worn-looking rope. A sign said, ‘Danger! Do not cross! ’ “We must find another way, ” said Habib, but Ahmad ignored him and set off alone. Then, halfway across, a slat broke under his foot. He grabbed the rope to steady himself, but it broke too. Habib watched, horrified, as Ahmad plunged into the swirling current. He was waving and shouting hysterically as the water swept him away. Habib knew he had to act. He pulled the broken rope out of the water and flung it frantically. Ahmad grabbed it and, seconds later, he was safe! As Ahmad lay in the sun to dry out, he realised how foolish he had been. He was lucky to be alive and he vowed never to ignore a warning again.
Last summer, while I was on holiday on a Greek island, my friends and I went for a walk to the top of a
beautiful
whitewashed village. It was
extremely
hot.

We spent a happy hour wandering up and down the narrow streets, and then we decided to
stop
at a lovely café.
Just
then, I tripped and fell over! “Oh no, I
think
I’ve twisted my ankle,
I cried.

I didn’t know how I was going to
get
down the hill. Then,
suddenly
, we heard the sound of hooves and an
old
man
appeared on a donkey! He
stopped
and
started
speaking to me in Greek. The café owner came over and translated. “
Get
onto the donkey,
he said, “and he’ll take you down the hill to the clinic in the town. ” My friends
helped
me onto the donkey and off we went!

The doctor at the clinic strapped up my ankle and I spent the rest of my holiday
happily
sunbathing on the beach. How fortunate for me the
old
man
and his

donkey appeared when they did!

2

One summer day, Ahmad and his friend
Habib
were hiking in the mountains. They came to the banks of a
fast
-flowing
river and
they wanted to
get
across.

Suddenly
, Ahmad spotted a
rope
bridge a few yards away. They went to inspect it. Several of its wooden slats were missing and there was no handrail
except for
a worn-looking
rope
. A
sign
said, ‘
Danger
! Do not cross! ’ “We
must
find another way,
said
Habib
,
but
Ahmad
ignored
him and set off alone. Then, halfway across, a slat broke under his foot. He grabbed the
rope
to steady himself,
but
it broke too.
Habib


watched
, horrified, as Ahmad plunged into the swirling
current
.

He was waving and shouting
hysterically
as the water swept him away.
Habib
knew he had to act. He pulled the broken
rope
out of the water and flung it
frantically
. Ahmad grabbed it and, seconds later, he was safe!

As Ahmad lay in the sun to dry out, he
realised
how foolish he had been. He was lucky to be
alive and
he vowed never to
ignore
a warning again.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay write a story about unforgettable day

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
369 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    an accident or injury that you have had or has happened to someone you know
    Here I would like to tell you about a traffic accident that I witnessed. On the way home from school, I saw a boy riding a motorbike not only without a helmet, but he was speeding and overtaking.  When he reached the crossroads, even though the traffic light had turned red, he kept going. and as a r...
  • 6band
    Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons of this and how it can be solved?
    It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of whether a day-to-day basis is ambulated by a smaller number of individuals is escalating at an alarming rate in current scenario. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with some effective solutions. Commencing with the...
  • 5band
    visited a beautiful place
    I have ever gone to many breathtaking. But the one I would like to tell you about is Phan Thiet. I will never forget this wonderful one-week trip with my friends during my summer vacation three years ago. Phan Thiet is a town in the province of Binh Thuan in southern Vietnam. The weather was general...
  • 5band
    I have ever gone to many breathtaking
    I have ever gone to many breathtaking. But the one I would like to tell you about is Phan Thiet. I will never forget this wonderful one-week trip with my friends during my summer vacation three years ago. Phan Thiet is a town in the province of Binh Thuan in southern Vietnam. The weather was general...
  • 5band
    reasons and effects of pollution
    There are a plethora of reasons why cities are becoming more polluted. First, overpopulation is the most important reason which caused pollution in cities. People in different areas of country would like to move to cities to find a good opportunity for their living, that can lead to several problems...
  • 5band
    Based on your analysis of the customer experience, identify what is the gap between importance and performance of customer - centric supply chain practice?
    Targets set when businesses want to apply effectively in putting customers at the center of the supply chain Improve speed and reduce shipping & production costs Respect the needs of each individual customer. Pay attention to the health and safety of customers. Problems that businesses will encoun...