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English Language Month activities

English Language Month activities GJkmw
A very good morning to our principle, beloved teachers and fellow students. As you know, our school is organising the English Language Month activities. Today, I would like to talk about the activities prepared by the English Language Society. We had prepared four interesting activities such as storytelling competition, talent competition, spelling bee and writing competition. First of all, we had the storytelling competition for those who are good in speaking skill. Every participant will stand a chance to win present such as books with interesting contents. For the participant are good in spelling of English words, you may join the spelling bee competition. Participants will receive certificates and 1st, 2nd and 3rd will receive trophies and certificates. We had prepared the talent competition. Participant can perform their interesting talent to us such as singing, dancing and musical performances. Last but not least, for those participants are interested becoming an author, you can come join the writing competition. You need to think of some creative and interesting storyline to able win this competition. We were prepared the good present for the winner. Thank you.
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morning to our principle, beloved teachers and fellow students. As you know, our school is
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organising
the English Language Month activities.
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Today
, I would like to talk about the activities
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by the English Language Society.

We had
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four
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interesting
activities such as storytelling
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, talent
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competition
, spelling bee and writing
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, we had the storytelling
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for those who are
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good in speaking
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. Every
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participant
will stand a chance to win present such as books with
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contents.

For the
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are
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the spelling bee
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Participants
will receive certificates and 1st, 2nd and 3rd will receive trophies and certificates.

We had
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the talent
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talent to us such as singing, dancing and musical performances.

Last
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participants
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becoming an author, you can
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the writing
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creative and
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storyline
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win this
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present for the winner.

Thank you.
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IELTS essay English Language Month activities

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
184 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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