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English Language and it's Obsession

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English may not be the most spoken language in the world, but it is the official language of more countries and is spoken by hundreds of millions of people across the globe. Nowadays numerous people abandon their own mother tongue and learning English but it will lead to forgetting their region language literacy and culture around that. Firstly, the number of people learning their region language will drops. As a result, the literacy and culture behind that language will vanish in a period of time. People find it hard to socialize with rural and native region-speaking people. Additionally, the Younger generation was unable to learn their rich knowledge of their own language. For an instance, if a speak to my younger cousin with a regional language He can not understand not even a single word this will make regional language disappear in the current world in a period of time. Even though, Governments must come-up with regulations and guidelines thus Students can only pursue the English language as a Secondary language. People have to be responsible for their region language in day-to-day life like speaking or writing. Moreover, NGOs and other native language promoting associations should create awareness in people about the importance of the mother tongue and how to save it for future generations. Parents also have to share their knowledge on own mother tongue, so that children can easily learn and get wisdom on that language. To conclude, despite having problems like an abandonment of region language literacy and culture also hard to socialize with native people. The community should encourage the people with proper guidelines and creating awareness. This not only helps the current generations but also helps the future as well.
English may not be the most spoken
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in the world,
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it is the official
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language
of more countries and
is spoken
by hundreds of millions of
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people
across the globe. Nowadays numerous
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people
abandon their
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own
mother tongue and learning English
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but
it will lead to forgetting their
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region
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language
literacy and culture around that.

Firstly
, the number of
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people
learning their
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region
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language
will
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As a result
, the literacy and culture behind that
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language
will vanish in a period of time.
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People
find it
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hard
to socialize with rural and native region-speaking
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people
.
Additionally
, the Younger generation was unable to learn their rich knowledge of their
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own
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language
. For an instance, if
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a speak
to my younger cousin with a regional
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language
He can
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not understand not
even a single word this will
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make
regional
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language
disappear in the
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current
world in a period of time.

Even though
,
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Governments
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must
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come
-up with regulations and guidelines
thus
Students can
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only
pursue the English
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language
as a Secondary
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language
.
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People
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have to
be responsible for their
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region
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language
in day-to-day life like speaking or writing.
Moreover
, NGOs and other native
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language
promoting associations should create awareness in
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people
about the importance of the mother tongue and how to save it for future generations. Parents
also
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have to
share their knowledge on
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own
mother tongue,
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so
that children can
easily
learn and
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get
wisdom on that language.

To conclude
, despite having problems like an abandonment of
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region
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language
literacy and culture
also
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hard
to socialize with native
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people
. The community should encourage the
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people
with proper guidelines and creating awareness. This not
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only
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helps
the
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current
generations
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but
also
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helps
the future
as well
.
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IELTS essay English Language and it's Obsession

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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