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Studding for PhD or Master advise request

Studding for PhD or Master advise request N89xW
I am a computer engineer in the field of software engineering and graduated with a master of science with a high degree and two internationally published papers. Due to my 18 years related work experience in a first rank ICT company in Iran and my professional skills as a project manager in my recent career, I am interested in studying postgraduate work in the international academic environment. So, I request you to advise me to study for a PhD or Master's again by my background and attached CV.
I am a computer engineer in the field of software engineering and graduated with a master of science with a high degree and two
internationally
published papers.

Due to my 18 years related work experience in a
first
rank ICT
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in Iran and my professional 
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
as a project manager in my recent career, I
am interested
 in studying postgraduate work in the international academic environment.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I request you to advise me to study for a PhD or Master's again by my background and attached CV.

IELTS essay Studding for PhD or Master advise request

Essay
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2 paragraphs
84 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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