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English as global language

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As we know today English is the most popular language all over the world, this language international and in majority than other languages. Nevertheless, a lot of humans cannot communicate clearly in English. Today we are face to face many benefits and disadvantages to know one global language. Firstly, international language pretty great for every kind of growth. Especially in economical and educational development. For instance, companies like Samsung, Apple and Microsoft are widely advocating English as the primary language for business. The main language of their products is English. Second advantage about communication with all nations. Today in all kind of studies English as a significant tool for passing on a message writtes in a particular research paper conveniently. For example, if people speak and write well in global language they will speak without any barriers. In fact, eighty five percent of all emails in the world are usually written in English. In many nations, English is used as a second language after the native languages. Nevertheless in here some disadvantages and drawbacks too, for instance some people speak with fair language skills, they can’t understand each others clearly and it make temporary challenges for them, because they are not native speakers. Second disadvantage about culture and traditions. As we know every culture is unique and all of them really interesting. Knowing them help to humans for being open minded. But, speaking in only English and about only global issues that’s unintentionally varnish different cultures. In addition in this situation tourism and travel too will increase.
As we know
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today
English is the most popular
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language
all over the world, this
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language
international and in majority than other
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languages
.
Nevertheless
,
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a lot of
humans cannot communicate
clearly
in English.
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Today
we are face to face
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many
benefits and disadvantages to know one global language.

Firstly
, international
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language
pretty great for every kind of growth.
Especially
in economical and educational development.
For instance
,
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companies
like Samsung, Apple and Microsoft are
widely
advocating English as the primary
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language
for business. The main
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language
of their products is English.

Second advantage about communication with all nations.
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Today
in all kind of studies English as a significant tool for passing on a message
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writtes
in a particular research paper
conveniently
.

For example
, if
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people
speak and write well in global
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language
they will speak without any barriers. In fact,
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eighty five
percent of all emails in the world are
usually
written in English.

In
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many
nations, English is
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used
as a second
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language
after the native
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languages
.
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in here
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disadvantages and drawbacks too,
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people
speak with
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fair
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language
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skills
, they can’t understand each
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others
clearly
and it
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make
temporary challenges for them,
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because
they are not native speakers. Second disadvantage about culture and traditions. As we know every culture is unique and all of them
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
really interesting
. Knowing them
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help
to humans for being
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open minded
.
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, speaking in
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only
English and about
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global issues that’s
unintentionally
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varnish
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different
cultures. In
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addition
in this situation tourism and travel too will increase.
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IELTS essay English as global language

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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