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Engineering and it's benefit

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Education is a vast sector. There are several different courses in which one can graduate. however one's interest plays a huge role in selecting the field. today I am going to discuss about one of the well known and important course in the education and which is engineering. Why we admit that engineering is the most important quotes compared with all other ports is because it is consist of sub branches and supply and she's also consists its branches it consists aeronautical engineering Power Engineering electrical computer civil automobile Information Technology many more there are individual courses also has some branches also as mentioned above if we take example of electrical engineering it divide on Power Engineering to clear energy in electronics and communication in engineering engineering tot humankind how they use formula and calculate to build their lives there are surrounding more advice and comfort
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however
one's interest plays a huge role in selecting the field.
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today
I am going to
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of the well known and
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course in the education and which is engineering.

Why we admit that
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engineering
is the most
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sub branches
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supply and
she's
also
consists its branches it consists aeronautical
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engineering
Power
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Engineering
electrical computer civil automobile Information Technology
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more there are individual courses
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has
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some
branches
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as mentioned above if we take example of electrical
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engineering
it divide on Power
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Engineering
to
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clear
energy in electronics and communication in
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engineering
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engineering
tot humankind how they
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use
formula and calculate to build their
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IELTS essay Engineering and it's benefit

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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