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more people prefer living in the city to in the coutryside. do you agree or disagree

more people prefer living in the city to in the coutryside. A39ne
Due to too much advertising, so some advertising was harmful to the people who buy the products but they have not purpose. Firstly, housewife always buy too much the goods because they feel satisfied about advertising. This is superfluous and waste money of their. Secondly, the advertising is too different from reality. firstly, the product advertising provide full of information about the goods, such as ingredient, material, size, colour, vv. Therefore, customers are well-informed about the detail of the product they would like to buy. and it is helpful for them to compare this product with others before they make a decision to buy the good one
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too much the
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they feel satisfied about advertising. This is superfluous and waste money of their.
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, the advertising is too
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different
from reality.

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firstly
, the
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product
advertising provide full of information about the
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goods
, such as ingredient, material, size,
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colour
,
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vv
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, customers are well-informed about the detail of the
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product
they would like to
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buy
.
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and
it is helpful for them to compare this
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product
with others
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before
they
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a decision to
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good
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IELTS essay more people prefer living in the city to in the coutryside.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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