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Empowerment create problems or not

Empowerment create problems or not rby6n

Empowerment is the power which is given for the people. Mostly, it refers to those who has power to do something. Such things are provided to maintain balance in the our society so that there won't be any chance of being victim to those who don't have such power. There are many facilities for women which is called as women empowerment. Nowadays, it is being used for their own benefits which has cause great difficulties in our community. Firstly, the measure problems seems to be in politics where the politicians has create many conflict on our locality in the name of cast for voting. Secondly, worker who are working under goverments.

Empowerment is the power which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Mostly
, it refers to those who has power to do something. Such things are provided
 to maintain balance in A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "our society" or "the society"?our societythe society
the our society
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that there won't be any chance of being victim to those who don't have such power. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 facilities for women which is called
 as women empowerment. Nowadays, it is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 benefits which has cause great difficulties in our community. Firstly
, the measure problems seems to be in politics where the politicians You should probably use "have", "haven".havehaven
has
Use past participle here: "created".created
create
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 conflict on our locality in the name of cast for voting. Secondly
, worker who are working under Possible spelling mistake found.governments
goverments
. 