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Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. v.1

Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. v. 1
Today’s work environment is more competitive than ever before and dynamic in nature. Social skills enable us to develop our own abilities to survive in a very competitive environment while helps a team to collaborate and perform better. These days, especially in times of transition and globalisation, technical skills and academic knowledge are not enough- social skills are also required to become a successful professional. First, some social skills are quite mandatory for an employee to work in an office where people with different designations and skill set work together. Discipline, ability to criticise oneself, communication skills, negotiation skills, ability to give and take criticism and team capabilities enable someone to work in a multinational company and become a successful worker. Lack of those social skills will put someone far back in the race. Technical skills are essential to actually execute something while corporate and social skills are essential to working in a team or serving customers. They both are essential qualities of a good employee and hence both should be present to be successful in a job. Second, our social skills take a very long time to develop while some technical skills could be taught to employees in few months. For instance, if someone with a very good academic background and social skills tries to learn how to operate a computer, would be able to do so in six months. However, no one can guarantee how long it will take to teach someone responsibility, self-confidence and discipline. It might take forever is some cases. From this regards, hiring authorities of a company should emphasise more on social skills of a candidate along with the other important qualifications for the job. Finally, corporate offices are like a big tree with many branches and roots. The employees are often considered as the roots of a company and if the roots are not firm and healthy enough, the tree is sure to suffer. Social skills are important for the employees to act as healthy and performing roots for a company. In summary, there is no denying to the fact that proper qualifications along with the better social skills are essential ingredients for the success of a person in professional life. The social skills among employees are also vital for the overall growth and productivity of an organisation as well. This is why a company must put a considerable emphasise on finding employees with better social skills and also arrange seminars and training sessions to enhance the employee's social skills.
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environment is more competitive than ever
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and dynamic in nature.
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Social
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skills
enable us to develop our
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abilities to survive in a
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competitive environment while
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helps
a team to collaborate and perform better. These days,
especially
in times of transition and
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globalisation
, technical
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skills
and academic knowledge are not
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in an office where
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designations and
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together. Discipline, ability to
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criticise
oneself, communication
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, negotiation
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, ability to give and take criticism and team capabilities enable
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to
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in a multinational
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and become a successful worker. Lack of those
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skills
will put
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far back in the race. Technical
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skills
are
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essential
to actually execute something while corporate and
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social
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skills
are
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essential
to working in a team or serving customers. They both are
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essential
qualities of a
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employee
and
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both should be present to be successful in a job.

Second, our
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take a
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long time to develop while
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technical
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academic background and
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tries to learn how to operate a computer, would be able to do
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in six months.
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responsibility, self-confidence and discipline. It might take forever is
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cases. From
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regards, hiring authorities of a
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more on
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of a candidate along with the other
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qualifications for the job.

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, corporate offices are like a
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tree with
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branches and roots. The
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are
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considered as the roots of a
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and if the roots are not firm and healthy
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, the tree is sure to suffer.
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for the
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employees
to act as healthy and performing roots for a
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.

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are
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among
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employees
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vital for the
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growth and productivity of an
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put a considerable
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on finding
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with better
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and
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IELTS essay Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
417 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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