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EMAIL SEND TO MY BROTHER TO TAKE YPUR ADICE

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I'm writing about asking for your some advice. This summer, I don't have to go to school so I want to do a part-time job in my freetime. I searched a lot of jobs on the Internet, however I don't know which job is suitable for me. I wil tell you some information about my strengths. First, I am able to communicate with foreign customer, I can speak many languages such as Korean, Spanish and English. Next, I have a passion for work in Marketing. I can develop marketing strategies for a short time and boost sales. I feel I am a creative person, there are many ideas in my mind if I want to do something. Finally, I am hard-working people. I always meet the deadlines on time and do my best to achieve a goal that I set clearly. So, Can you reply me as soon as possible, please? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Linh

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