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Email for a follow up on a job interview

Email for a follow up on a job interview MmQAN
I hope all is well. I know how busy you probably are, but I spoke with you recently about a transfer into a clerk position when the second shift closed at the SV3 warehouse and wanted to check in on your decision timeline. I have provided you with the medical limitation that you requested. Tomorrow will be a week since my last contact with anyone at AOA (Human Resources/Management) about a clerk position with the company. According to my understanding when the second shift closed on May 28, 2021, I was informed there was a clerk position available at SV2 and SV4 warehouse. Upon arriving at each warehouse I was told that these positions were not available. Please let me know if it would be helpful for me to provide any additional information. In addition an update on resolving this matter.
I hope all is well. I know how busy you
probably
are,
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but
I spoke with you recently about a transfer into a clerk
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position
when the second shift closed at the SV3 warehouse and wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in on your decision timeline.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have provided you with the medical limitation that you requested. Tomorrow will be a week since my last contact with anyone at AOA (Human Resources/Management) about a clerk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
with the
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company
.

According to my understanding when the second shift closed on May 28, 2021, I
was informed
there was a clerk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
available at SV2 and SV4 warehouse. Upon arriving at each warehouse I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that these
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positions
were not available.

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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if it would be helpful for me to provide any additional information. In
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addition
an update on resolving this matter.
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IELTS essay Email for a follow up on a job interview

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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