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electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France

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University delivers a lot of knowledge to its respective students, but nowadays students or graduates have this common concern that the knowledge and skills taught by the university is not actually something that they cannot implement in their workplace, at least not all the aspects of it. Although there are few of them who most likely think that universities that some lessons are perhaps thought to the students for their betterment and not by talking organizations or workplaces under consideration. There have been a lot of instances wherein graduates have no knowledge about the work they have been assigned which leads people to think that universities or colleges have provided a knowledge which is not implemented in the workplace. They tend to believe that the knowledge gained by them was a waste and also that they might have to learn things in a different manner and become agile in order to develop their knowledge regarding specific factors that plays an important role in their workplace for example if an employee is asked to code a program in python language but he or she must have no knowledge about it as that subject was never apart of lessons they had been taught in during their graduations. There are also people who think that university and colleges can provide us basic knowledge that is enough to get us into an organization and from there we individuals are supposed to work on the skills if they wish to acquire a job or a position. In college we learn a lot of things which might help us in some way in future the responsibility of universities is to provide basic knowledge to its students which might help them in life. As per my interpretation knowledge is never a waste, and everything that is taught might be helpful to us in future even though it cannot be implemented in our work life.
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knowledge
to its respective
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students
,
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but
nowadays
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students
or graduates have this common concern that the
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knowledge
and
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skills
taught by the
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university
is not actually something that they cannot implement in their
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workplace
, at least not all the aspects of it. Although there are few of them who most likely
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think
that
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universities
that
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some
lessons are perhaps
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thought
to the
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students
for their betterment and not by talking organizations or
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workplaces
under consideration.

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a lot of
instances wherein graduates have no
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knowledge
about the work they have
been assigned
which leads
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people
to
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think
that
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universities
or colleges have provided a
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knowledge
which is not implemented in the
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workplace
. They tend to believe that the
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knowledge
gained by them was a waste and
also
that they
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might
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have to
learn things in a
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different
manner and become agile in order to develop their
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knowledge
regarding specific factors that plays an
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important
role in their
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workplace
for example
if an employee
is asked
to code a program in python language
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but
he or she
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must
have no
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knowledge
about it as that subject was never
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apart of
lessons they had
been taught
in during their graduations.

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also
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knowledge
that is
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enough
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get
us into an organization and from there we individuals
are supposed
to work on the
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skills
if they wish to acquire a job or a position. In
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college we
learn
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a lot of
things which
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might
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help
us in
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some
way in future the responsibility of
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universities
is to provide basic
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knowledge
to its
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students
which
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might
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help
them in life.

As per my interpretation
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knowledge
is never a waste, and everything that
is taught
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might
be helpful to us in future
even though
it cannot
be implemented
in our work life.
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IELTS essay electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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