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Electricity generated in a hydroelectric power plant

Electricity generated in a hydroelectric power plant DqD2m

The picture given illustrates the process of electric current generation in a hydroelectric power station. The basic principle of movement from water from higher concentration to a lower concentration is used here to create electric power. The flowing water from the river is stored in a dam creating the upper reservoir. During daytime, the intake of the dam is open thus, allowing the water to rush to the lower reservoir through the reverversible turbines allowing them to rotate. A generator is connected to the axial of the turbines which is responsible for the electricity generation. The current-voltage combination is hence transmitted via power lines to the National grid. At the end of the day, this flow of water is reversed. The liquid stored in the low-level reservoir is pumped back to the high-level reservoir by anticlock rotation of the turbines. The inlet of the dam is closed during this process.

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given
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current
 generation in a hydroelectric power station.

The basic principle of movement from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from higher concentration to a lower concentration is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 here to create electric power. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 flowing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from the river is stored
 in a dam creating the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtanksupplystockpilestoragelakesource
reservoir
. During daytime, the intake of the dam is open thus
, allowing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to rush to the lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtanksupplystockpilestoragelakesource
reservoir
 through the Possible spelling mistake found.reversible
reverversible
 turbines allowing them to rotate. A generator is connected
 to The phrase 'the axial of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the axial of
 the turbines which is responsible for the electricity generation. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
-voltage combination is hence
 transmitted via power lines to the National grid.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day, this flow of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is reversed
. The liquid stored in the low-level You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtanksupplystockpilestoragelakesource
reservoir
is pumped
 back to the high-level You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtanksupplystockpilestoragelakesource
reservoir
 by Possible spelling mistake found.anti clockantic lock
anticlock
 rotation of the turbines. The inlet of the dam is closed
 during this process. 