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prior to now, a number of people used to live in small towns where all folks knew each other.

prior to now, a number of people used to live in small towns where all folks knew each other. 70nLn
Prior to now, a number of people used to live in small towns where all folks knew each other. Although there were some drawbacks to living in a small town, I believe merits would overweigh the disadvantages. There were numerous benefits of living in small settlements in the past. Firstly, strong sense of community can be mentioned, which everyone looked after another. People would help each other in difficult situations. For example, when a baby was born, a child was ill, or relatives were dying, people would help each other to deal with the situation. This could be an advantage, especially if someone were lacking a family of their own. Secondly, due to the fact of low population the wrongdoers could be detected easily. This led to lower crime rates and a safer place to raise kids. Thirdly, due to having fewer roads, fewer cars, and lower population, there were less traffic and people could enjoy breathing clean air. Lastly, smaller schools and smaller class sized that could lead children to get more individual attention. On the other hand, there were a number of difficulties living in small towns. Although people had a plethora of social connections, this could reduce people’s privacy, especially for some people who rather to keep the details of their life for themselves. Another drawback is while students could get more attention from their teachers, it was difficult to build a study environment and the majority of furniture were poor. This could lead to weaker study process. To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the beneficial effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
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, a number of
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. Although there were
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drawbacks to living in a
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town, I believe merits would
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overweigh
the disadvantages.

There were numerous benefits of living in
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small
settlements in the past.
Firstly
, strong sense of community can
be mentioned
, which everyone looked after another.
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People
would
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help
each
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other
in difficult situations.
For example
, when a baby
was born
, a child was ill, or relatives were dying,
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people
would
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help
each
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other
to deal with the situation. This could be an advantage,
especially
if someone were lacking a family of their
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own
.
Secondly
, due to the fact of low population the wrongdoers could
be detected
easily
. This led to lower crime rates and a safer place to raise kids.
Thirdly
, due to having fewer roads, fewer cars, and lower population, there were less traffic and
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people
could enjoy breathing clean air.
Lastly
, smaller schools and smaller
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class
sized that could lead children to
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get
more individual attention.

On the
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other
hand, there were a number of difficulties living in
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small
towns. Although
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people
had a plethora of social connections, this could
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reduce
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people’s
privacy,
especially
for
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some
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people
who
rather
to
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keep
the
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details
of their life for themselves. Another drawback is while students could
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get
more attention from their teachers, it was difficult to build a study environment and the majority of furniture were poor. This could lead to weaker study process.

To summarize
, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to
properly
give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons.
Therefore
, it is
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clear
that the
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idea
of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot
be supported
. After thorough analysis on this subject, it
is predicted
that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the beneficial effects, and
because of this
, classroom teachers will never
be substituted
for technology.
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IELTS essay prior to now, a number of people used to live in small towns where all folks knew each other.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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