Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Eid Mubarak to you and your family

Eid Mubarak to you and your family e5o3J
Eid Mubarak to you and your family. May the Almighty anoint you with the valiance to condemn the ethnocide in Kashmir, as well as the atrocities against the Palestinians, which is at its zenith. Woefully, we, Muslims, are going to celebrate our liberty, while the rest shall mourn in despair. Instead of buying branded attires, let's pray for the upheaval of the enemies of Islam. Muslim unity is the true essence of Eid.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eid
Mubarak to you and your family. May the Almighty anoint you with the valiance to condemn the
Possible spelling mistake found.
ethnocide
in Kashmir,
as well
as the atrocities against the Palestinians, which is at its zenith.
Woefully
, we, Muslims, are going to celebrate our liberty, while the rest shall mourn in despair.

Instead
of buying branded attires,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
's pray for the upheaval of the enemies of Islam.

Muslim unity is the true essence of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eid
.

IELTS essay Eid Mubarak to you and your family

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
73 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Eid Mubarak to you and your family