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EFFECTS OF OVERPOPULATION

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Overpopulation is a global problem; furthermore, unfortunately, this problem keeps growing. Overpopulation results in several consequences such as the overuse of coals, oils, and natural gases which leads to global warming, unemployment, and the increase in the cost of living. The first result of overpopulation is the overuse of coals, oils, and gases which leads to global warming. Coals, oils, and natural gases are part of our life, and everyone uses them in their daily life. However, coals, oils, and natural gases are overused due to overpopulation and this situation is the biggest reason for global warming. The second result of overpopulation is that it causes unemployment. The number of unemployed people is much higher than job advertisements because of overpopulation and this situation causes unemployment. In addition to unemployment, the salary of a worker decreases because of overpopulation. The third result of overpopulation is that it increases the cost of living. The natural sources of the world are limited; however, the number of people keeps increasing. As a result of this situation, the sources of the world are not enough to feed all the people, and unfortunately, the cost of living increases because of overpopulation. To sum up, the overuse of coals, oils, and natural gases which leads to global warming, unemployment, and the increase in the cost of living are the three main results of overpopulation. In addition, I hope that necessary steps and precautions will be taken, and this problem will be eradicated in the future.
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Overpopulation
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global
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Overpopulation
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results
in several consequences such as the overuse of coals,
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oils
, and
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natural
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gases
which leads to
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global
warming,
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unemployment
, and the
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increase
in the
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cost
of living.

The
first
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result
of
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overpopulation
is the overuse of coals,
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oils
, and
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gases
which leads to
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global
warming. Coals,
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oils
, and
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natural
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gases
are part of our life, and everyone
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uses
them in their daily life.
However
, coals,
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oils
, and
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natural
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gases
are overused
due to
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overpopulation
and this situation is the biggest reason for
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global
warming.

The second
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result
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overpopulation
is that it causes
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unemployment
. The number of unemployed
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people
is much higher than job advertisements
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because
of
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overpopulation
and this situation causes
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unemployment
.
In addition
to
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unemployment
, the salary of a worker decreases
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because
of overpopulation.

The third
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result
of
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overpopulation
is that it
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increases
the
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cost
of living. The
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natural
sources of the world
are limited
;
however
, the number of
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people
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keeps
increasing. As a
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result
of this situation, the sources of the world are not
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enough
to feed all the
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people
, and unfortunately, the
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cost
of living
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increases
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because
of overpopulation.

To sum up, the overuse of coals,
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oils
, and
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natural
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gases
which leads to
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global
warming,
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unemployment
, and the
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increase
in the
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cost
of living are the three main
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results
of
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overpopulation
.
In addition
, I hope that necessary steps and precautions will
be taken
, and this problem will
be eradicated
in the future.
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IELTS essay EFFECTS OF OVERPOPULATION

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
249 words
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