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Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads and this an cause problems for both of them. Discuss reasons and measures

Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads and this an cause problems for both of them. Discuss reasons and measures 7JBdb
In the cutting edge epoch, due to population explosion the chances of accidents are on alarming rate because of careless driving this is due to motorlist and cyclist use the same lane. In this dessertation i will both problems and solutions in ensuing crumbs of writings. The firts and foremost reason of the hurdle is that almost both men and women are employees so they are always in hurry to reach on the desired destination for that purpose they follow roughly driving and does not follow traffic rules and break yhe rules and regulation. Secondly, the chance of accident occour mostly at night time owing to four wheeler has dipper feature but deniers neglect this function on the contrary, cycle have no feature like this so when they over take each other so the chance of accident happen on same road. For instance, in India, the survey conducted by the government that in t-junctions people do not follow speed limit instruction and accident happen. It os truely said waste haste make mistakes. To overcome these problems some measures should be taken by the government and individual also contribute in it because of safety purpose. Initial step should be taken against those people who break the rules are fined heavily. Secondly, action for roads which are unplanned. Reconstruct the roads so patholes are cover and make billbords and write slogon drive slowly and safe lives of others. At last, government will divide the roads into two halves for two wheeler on one side and three or four wheeler on other side in this way the chances of accidents are less in numbers. For instance, in abroad pedestrain path and crossing zebbra lines help people to cross the road and there is no chamce of accident. To recapitulate, government as well as nation people involved their self for declining accidents chances because it is better to spent on present problem and leave the future in bucket list.
In the cutting edge epoch, due to population explosion the
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chances
of
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accidents
are on alarming rate
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because
of careless driving this is due to
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motorlist
and cyclist
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use
the same lane. In this
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dessertation
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i
will both problems and solutions in ensuing crumbs of writings. The
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firts
and foremost reason of the hurdle is that almost both
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men
and women are employees
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so
they are always in hurry to reach on the desired destination for that purpose they follow roughly driving and does not follow traffic
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rules
and break
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yhe
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rules
and regulation.
Secondly
, the chance of
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accident
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occour
mostly
at
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night time
owing to four
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wheeler
has dipper feature
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but
deniers neglect this function
on the contrary
, cycle have no feature like this
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so
when they over take each other
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so
the chance of
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accident
happen on same
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road
.
For instance
, in India, the survey conducted by the
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government
that in t-junctions
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people
do not follow speed limit instruction and
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accident
happen.
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It os
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truely
said waste haste
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make
mistakes. To overcome these problems
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some
measures should
be taken
by the
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government
and individual
also
contribute in it
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because
of safety purpose. Initial step should
be taken
against those
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people
who break the
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rules
are fined
heavily
.
Secondly
, action for
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roads
which
are unplanned
. Reconstruct the
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roads
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so
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patholes
are cover and
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make
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billbords
and
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write slogon
drive
slowly
and safe
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lives
of others. At last,
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government
will divide the
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roads
into two halves for
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two wheeler
on one side and three or four
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wheeler
on other side in this way the
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chances
of
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accidents
are less in numbers.
For instance
, in abroad
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pedestrain
path and crossing
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zebbra
lines
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help
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people
to cross the
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road
and there is no
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chamce
of
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accident
. To recapitulate,
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government
as well
as nation
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people
involved their self for declining
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accidents
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chances
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is better to spent on present problem and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the future in bucket list.
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IELTS essay Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads and this an cause problems for both of them. Discuss reasons and measures

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