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effects of covid 19 in the human life

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From the reading passage as well as my social knowledge, I deeply understand that the respiratory virus COVID-19 significantly affects human lives. An increasing number of residents have lost their jobs as those workplaces are temporarily closed or the others have to sell their stores to pay for living. For several parents whose children still study homeschooling like my family, they have to economize little by little to pay for their child’s school fees and all bills. However, I figure that the natural environment is gradually healed and gets better, our city also becomes cleaner due to the reduction of vehicle emission. Cities will be more liveable, resilient as soon as the government realizes the benefits of the expansion of walking and cycling, encouraging residents to limit the number of private cars. Despite the global pandemic, I hope each individual sees opportunities not only to help themselves but also to help the city overcome.
From the reading passage
as well
as my social knowledge, I
deeply
understand that the respiratory virus COVID-19
significantly
affects human
lives
. An increasing number of residents have lost their jobs as those workplaces are
temporarily
closed or the others
have to
sell their stores to pay for living. For several parents whose children
still
study homeschooling like my family, they
have to
economize
little
by
little
to pay for their child’s school fees and all bills.
However
, I figure that the natural environment is
gradually
healed and
gets
better, our city
also
becomes cleaner due to the reduction of vehicle emission. Cities will be more liveable, resilient as
soon
as the
government
realizes the benefits of the expansion of walking and cycling, encouraging residents to limit the number of private cars. Despite the global pandemic, I hope each individual
sees
opportunities not
only
to
help
themselves
but
also
to
help
the city overcome.
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IELTS essay effects of covid 19 in the human life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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