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effect of technology on reading and writing skills

effect of technology on reading and writing skills K0AAM
Due to the advancement of technology people are using technological appliances upto a greater extent. However, many of the opinion technology done more harm then good because rapidly use of technical equipment effect reading and writing skills. I agree with this notion and all views regarding this will be discussed further. To embark on, enormous use of technological device having a negative impact all over the community. firstly, it increase the useage of syber slang which means use of abrivation. offspring are using shortcut of words in there school test as well as in exam it will ultimately effect there marks. However, person are also facing a lot of difficulties in his job because they are addicted to use of syber slang which is unprofessional and they also forget the exact words to write. Secondly, they also forget the grammar rules because computer remove all the error automatically. In addition, in the past time everyone spent there leasure time reafing of books and novels but in this period derotation of reading decrease day by day. Furthermore, pupils and adults spent most of there time on web browsing and it misleads them as a result most of students are indulge in criminal offence. However, reading habits are also going to be vanished. There are also some apps available to read books or documents like magtap. This is a app through we can listen our documents. To conclude, reading and writing of documents by itself is a arachaia idea. However, technological revolution abolish this traditional idea with their gadgets. The government and educational institutions should take appropriate steps to solve this problem.
Due to the advancement of technology
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people
are using technological appliances
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upto
a greater extent.
However
,
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many
of the opinion technology done more harm
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then
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good
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because
rapidly
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use
of technical equipment effect
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reading
and writing
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skills
. I
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agree
with this notion and all views regarding this will
be discussed
further
.

To embark on, enormous
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use
of technological device having a
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negative
impact all over the community.
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firstly
, it
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increase
the
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useage
of
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syber
slang which means
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use
of
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abrivation
.
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offspring
are using shortcut of words in there school
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test
as well
as in exam it will
ultimately
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effect
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there
marks.
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, person are
also
facing
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a lot of
difficulties in his job
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because
they
are addicted
to
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use
of
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syber
slang which is
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unprofessional and
they
also
forget the exact words to write.
Secondly
, they
also
forget the grammar
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rules
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because
computer remove all the error
automatically
.
In addition
, in the
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past time
everyone spent there
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leasure
time
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reafing
of books and novels
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but
in this period
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derotation
of
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reading
decrease day by day.
Furthermore
, pupils and adults spent most of there time on web browsing and it misleads them
as a result
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most of students
are
Consider using a past participle here: "indulged".
indulge
in criminal
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offence
.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
habits are
also
going to
be vanished
. There are
also
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some
apps available to read books or documents like
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magtap
. This is
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
app through we can listen our documents.

To conclude
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
and writing of documents by itself is
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a
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arachaia
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idea
.
However
, technological revolution abolish this traditional
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idea
with their gadgets. The
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government
and educational institutions should take appropriate steps to solve this problem.
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IELTS essay effect of technology on reading and writing skills

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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