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Education should be free or compulsory.To What extend do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that education should be free because of the various living conditions of people, while the otgers think it should be compulsory and under control. Below I will support my ideas to the extent above and give my examples. In many countries education is free and one can choose to study or not for his or her wish and could decide as parent's will. And no control or overview is taken by the government. There children can decide their lives and activities for their purposes and no restrictions they will meet on their way of life. But in some other countries children have to attend school or liceums because there is compulsory education is required. For example, in Uzbekistan pupils must study for 11 years at schools and it is under control by government. They should attend and cannot miss
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believe that education should be free
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it should be compulsory and under control. Below I will support my
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to the extent above and give my examples. In
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countries
education is free and one can choose to study or not for
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his or her
wish and could decide as parent's will. And no control or overview
is taken
by the
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government
. There children can decide their
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lives
and activities for their purposes and no restrictions they will
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meet
on their way of life.
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in
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other countries children
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have to
attend school or
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liceums
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because
there is compulsory education
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.
For example
, in Uzbekistan pupils
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must
study for 11 years at schools and it is under control by
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. They should attend and cannot
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miss

IELTS essay Education should be free or compulsory.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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