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Education problem in my country

Education problem in my country Dqr0p

well, first of all, we have to study for 12 years of our lives at school. And some of our courses in high school include university courses in the USA. so, we have to study harder than others. Consequently, our students in high schools are more literate but as you know there is a university entrance exam in Iran that takes place once a year. If you pass that exam you will enter a university. Our country follows The British education system which is research-oriented.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWell
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first of all
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study for 12 years of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 at school. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of our courses in high school include university courses in the USA. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study harder than others. Consequently
, our students in high schools are more literate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as you know there is a university entrance exam in Iran that takes place once a year. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you pass that exam you will enter a university. Our country follows The British education system which is research-oriented. 