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Education is an important issue in one's life. It is the key to success in the future and to have many opportunities in our life.

Education is an important issue in one's life. It is the key to success in the future and to have many opportunities in our life. p7G0
Education is an important issue in one's life. It is the key to success in the future and to have many opportunities in our life. Teacher plays a vital role in education world who shapes every human as a person. They give us the opportunity to become a productive member of a civilized society by acquiring all the necessary skills. Now I’m going to write about my lovely teacher, who she was, why I liked her, what things made a teacher respected. Before writing I will touch on some points. Our educational system consists of 7 stages. Nowadays I’m Sophomore in Bachelor’s degree and I major in foreign languages field who wants to study in Master’s and Doctoral degrees in the future. I pay my tuition fee and get scholarship with high mark every year. I wanted to go to better-respected Universities of Tashkent, unfortunately I’m studying our pedagogical institute in my hometown. But I met my best, literate, knowledgeable, approachable, engaging teacher in this place. She was Durdona Sultanova. Why was? Because she taught us when we were freshmen. Nowadays she is working in Tashkent State University. I wish she would teach us again. She was level-headed, committed and demanding teacher. I used to keep up with studies in her face – to – face classes. I tried not to fall behind studies attending her lectures. Miss Durdona used to give us her feedbacks after taking our exam results. Attending her lessons was interesting, feeling myself freely and having useful feedbacks were pushover. If we have to cram for an exam, she ‘ll do her best for helping us. I always passed her exams, failing from her exams was not for me. I enrolled on her extensive course, but we did not finish it. I wish I had attended her intensive course. Her all skills were perfect. She used to create wonderful atmosphere in her lessons. Students were trying to show their abilities with playing different role plays. Long story short, her lessons were unforgettable and marvelous. I was astonished from qualities which she had. I admitted one thing, I did not catch up taking enough knowledge from my lovely teacher. But I ‘m sure one thing, I will try to be best teacher like her. Having and being lovely teacher is great success in one’s life. Education is an important issue in one's life. It is the key to success in the future and to have many opportunities in our life. Teacher plays a vital role in education world who shapes every human as a person. They give us the opportunity to become a productive member of a civilized society by acquiring all the necessary skills. Now I’m going to write about my lovely teacher, who she was, why I liked her, what things made a teacher respected. Before writing I will touch on some points. Our educational system consists of 7 stages. Nowadays I’m Sophomore in Bachelor’s degree and I major in foreign languages field who wants to study in Master’s and Doctoral degrees in the future. I pay my tuition fee and get scholarship with high mark every year. I wanted to go to better-respected Universities of Tashkent, unfortunately I’m studying our pedagogical institute in my hometown. But I met my best, literate, knowledgeable, approachable, engaging teacher in this place. She was Durdona Sultanova. Why was? Because she taught us when we were freshmen. Nowadays she is working in Tashkent State University. I wish she would teach us again. She was level-headed, committed and demanding teacher. I used to keep up with studies in her face – to – face classes. I tried not to fall behind studies attending her lectures. Miss Durdona used to give us her feedbacks after taking our exam results. Attending her lessons was interesting, feeling myself freely and having useful feedbacks were pushover. If we have to cram for an exam, she ‘ll do her best for helping us. I always passed her exams, failing from her exams was not for me. I enrolled on her extensive course, but we did not finish it. I wish I had attended her intensive course. Her all skills were perfect.
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Teacher
plays a vital role in
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education
world
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shapes every human as a person. They
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us the
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opportunity
to become a productive member of a civilized society by acquiring all the necessary
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skills
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Now
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lovely
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who
she was, why I liked her, what things made a
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respected.
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writing I
will touch on
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some
points. Our educational system consists of 7 stages.
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Nowadays
I’m Sophomore in Bachelor’s
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degree
and I major in foreign languages field
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who
wants to
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study
in Master’s and Doctoral
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degrees
in the
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future
. I pay my tuition fee and
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get
scholarship with high mark every year. I wanted to go to better-respected
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Universities
of Tashkent, unfortunately I’m studying our pedagogical institute in my hometown.
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But
I met my
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best
, literate, knowledgeable, approachable, engaging
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teacher
in this place. She was
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Durdona
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Sultanova
. Why was?
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Because
she taught us when we were freshmen.
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Nowadays
she is working in Tashkent State
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. I
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she would teach us again. She was level-headed, committed and demanding
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classes. I tried not to fall behind
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attending her lectures. Miss
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Durdona
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used
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after taking our exam results. Attending her
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was interesting, feeling myself
freely
and having useful
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feedbacks
were pushover. If we
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have to
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best
for helping us. I always passed her exams, failing from her exams was not for me.
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her extensive
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course
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I
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I had attended her intensive
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course
. Her all
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skills
were perfect.

She
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used
to create wonderful atmosphere in her
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lessons
. Students were trying to
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show
their abilities with playing
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different
role plays. Long story short, her
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lessons
were unforgettable and marvelous. I
was astonished
from qualities which she had. I admitted one thing, I did not catch up taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
knowledge from my
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lovely
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teacher
.
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But
I ‘m sure one thing, I will try to be
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best
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teacher
like her. Having and being
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lovely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
is great success in one’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Education
is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
issue in one's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. It is the key to success in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
and to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunities
in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Teacher
plays a vital role in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
shapes every human as a person. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
give
us the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
to become a productive member of a civilized society by acquiring all the necessary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I’m going to write about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lovely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
she was, why I liked her, what things made a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
respected.
“Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
The comma is probably missing here: "writing, I".
writing I
will touch on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
points. Our educational system consists of 7 stages.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Nowadays
I’m Sophomore in Bachelor’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
and I major in foreign languages field
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
wants to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in Master’s and Doctoral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degrees
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. I pay my tuition fee and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
scholarship with high mark every year. I wanted to go to better-respected
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Universities
of Tashkent, unfortunately I’m studying our pedagogical institute in my hometown.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I met my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
, literate, knowledgeable, approachable, engaging
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
in this place. She was
Possible spelling mistake found.
Durdona
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sultanova
. Why was?
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
she taught us when we were freshmen.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Nowadays
she is working in Tashkent State
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
University
. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wish
she would teach us again. She was level-headed, committed and demanding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
in her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
face
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
to
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
face
classes. I tried not to fall behind
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
attending her lectures. Miss
Possible spelling mistake found.
Durdona
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
give
us her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feedbacks
after taking our exam results. Attending her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
was interesting, feeling myself
freely
and having useful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feedbacks
were pushover. If we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
cram for an exam, she ‘ll do her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
for helping us. I always passed her exams, failing from her exams was not for me.
The usual collocation for "enrolled" is "in" (a school) or "for" (a course). Did you mean "I enrolled in" or "I enrolled for"?
I enrolled on
her extensive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we did not finish it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wish
I had attended her intensive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Her all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
were perfect.
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IELTS essay Education is an important issue in one's life. It is the key to success in the future and to have many opportunities in our life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
696 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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