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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.7

Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 7
Education is becoming very expensive nowadays and there is a debate among people whether government should provide completely free education or not. I strongly believe that education should be available to everyone for free of cost. Some will advocate that tertiary education has to continue as a paid one. They argue that students who are all attending universities usually end up getting high paid jobs and it is ok to payback for the quality education. Also, if majority of the people can able to afford higher education it will be difficult to find workforce for manual jobs, which will affect the economy. Also, There is also another perspective for this issue, such as education is also basic right for all the citizen and government should make sure that there is no one left behind because of their financial status. It is hard to justify that young children cannot pursue higher education just because their parents are not rich enough to afford. Neighborhoods with less education opportunities always end up with high crime rates. Education will bring more socio-economic prosper. After considering both sides of the arguments, I completely agree that education should be available to all in spite of race, religion, gender, and economy status. It will make the education system fair and provide equal opportunities to all. Education is the major stepping stone to overcome any hurdles one might face in their life and government has responsibility to provide that to all. After all, an educated population is the biggest asset of any nation.
Education
is becoming
very
expensive nowadays and there is a debate among
people
whether
government
should provide completely free
education
or not. I
strongly
believe that
education
should be available to everyone for free of cost.

Some
will advocate that tertiary
education
has to
continue as a paid one. They argue that students who are all attending universities
usually
end
up getting high paid jobs and it is ok to payback for the quality education.

Also
, if
majority of
the
people
can able to
afford higher
education
it will be difficult to find workforce for manual jobs, which will affect the economy.
Also
,

There is
also
another perspective for this issue, such as
education
is
also
basic right for all the citizen and
government
should
make
sure that there is no one
left
behind
because
of their financial status.

It is
hard
to justify that young children cannot pursue higher
education
just
because
their parents are not rich
enough
to afford. Neighborhoods with less
education
opportunities always
end
up with high crime rates.

Education will bring more
socio-economic
prosper.

After considering both sides of the arguments, I completely
agree
that
education
should be available to all
in spite of
race, religion, gender, and economy status. It will
make
the
education
system
fair
and provide equal opportunities to all.
Education
is the major stepping stone to overcome any hurdles one might face in their life and
government
has responsibility to provide that to all.
After all
, an educated population is the biggest asset of any nation.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 7

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
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