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Edmontosauruses migrated in the winter for surviving

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The author of the reading believes that Edmontosauruses migrated in the winter for surviving and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecturer rejects the claim made in the reading, casting doubt on all the three reasons presented in the passage. First, the author claims that based on the edmontosaur's diet, it can be claimed that they had migrated during the winter to find more food. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that at that time the summer was warmer than today, and all conditions were more suitable for growing enough plants. Also, she mentions that there was ample nutrition for their feeding. So, they did not need to emigrate to other places. The author of the reading states that those dinosaurs lived in herds and migrated with each other as like as contemporary migratory animals that live in herds and emigrate with each other. The lecturer rebuts this. She mentions that living in a herd has several reasons. She elaborates on this by mentioning that other reasons such as protect against some predators was the possible reason. Also, she says that some animals such as a kind of elk live in herds, but they don't emigrate. Finally, the writer points out that edmontosaurs had some physical ability and were capable of migrating long distances. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that young edmontosaurs were not able to walk as fast as their adults. Moreover, youngsters couldn't survive alone. Therefore, their parents couldn't leave them and couldn't emigrate.

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Edmontosauruses
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reasons
 of support. However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
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reasons
 presented in the passage.

First
, the author claims that based on the Possible spelling mistake found.brontosaur
edmontosaur
's diet, it can be claimed
 that they had migrated during the winter to find more food. This point is challenged
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
. She says that at that time the summer was warmer than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, and all conditions were more suitable for growing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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, she mentions that there was ample nutrition for their feeding. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, they did not need to emigrate to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 places.

The author of the reading states that those dinosaurs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
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herds
 and migrated with each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 as like as contemporary migratory animals that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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herds
 and emigrate with each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 rebuts this. She mentions that living in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthrongbroodswarmhordemobflock
herd
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reasons
. She elaborates on this by mentioning that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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reasons
 such as protect against This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 predators was the possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
. Also
, she says that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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live
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herds
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they don't emigrate.

Finally
, the writer points out that Possible spelling mistake found.brontosaurs
edmontosaurs
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some
 physical ability and were capable of migrating long distances. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
, on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 hand, states that young Possible spelling mistake found.brontosaurs
edmontosaurs
 were not able to walk as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 as their adults. Moreover
, youngsters couldn't survive alone. Therefore
, their parents couldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 them and couldn't emigrate. 