The selection of suitable parameters to determine the success of any country is usually a topic of discussion. Many people believe that the evaluation should be done primarily on the basis of economic growth of that nation. However, I agree with others who argue that besides the earlier mentioned point, other factors should also be considered.
Undoubtedly, a strong economy is necessary for the prosperity of any country. As this directly means better job opportunities, improved employment rate and besides this, the government will have enough funds for the development of better infrastructure. For example, roads and public buildings can be upgraded. Additionally, better funds help to hold a better position worldwide.
Nevertheless, depending solely on the above factors is not a good idea for the reason that, other points are again equally important. Firstly, any society can only prosper in true manner if their social wellbeing, intellectual progress and the basic rights are being looked after and citizens are enjoying unbiased justice. For instance, if the minority classes are equally treated and given all the rights as well. Secondly, the levels of efforts in preserving the nature and environment should also be taken into account. As a country with high fund status with poor habitat conditions cannot be considered as blooming. Lastly, the biggest asset is an educated youth, so it should be accounted together with others for the rating of a region or territory.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of success, but social, environmental and education criteria are equally significant too.
The selection of suitable parameters to determine the success of any country is
usually
a topic of discussion.
Many
people
believe that the evaluation should
be done
primarily
on the basis of economic growth of that nation.
However
, I
agree
with others who argue that
besides
the earlier mentioned point,
other
factors should
also
be considered
.
Undoubtedly
, a strong economy is necessary for the prosperity of any country. As this
directly
means
better
job opportunities,
improved
employment rate and
besides
this, the
government
will have
enough
funds for the development of
better
infrastructure.
For example
, roads and public buildings can
be upgraded
.
Additionally
,
better
funds
help
to hold a
better
position worldwide.
Nevertheless
, depending
solely
on the above factors is not a
good
idea
for the reason that,
other
points are again
equally
important
.
Firstly
, any society can
only
prosper in true manner if their social
wellbeing
, intellectual progress and the basic rights are
being looked
after and citizens are enjoying unbiased justice.
For instance
, if the minority classes are
equally
treated and
given
all the rights
as well
.
Secondly
, the levels of efforts in preserving the nature and environment should
also
be taken
into account. As a country with high fund status with poor habitat conditions cannot
be considered
as blooming.
Lastly
, the biggest asset is an educated youth,
so
it should
be accounted
together with others for the rating of a region or territory.
In conclusion
, the economy is
obviously
a key marker of success,
but
social, environmental and education criteria are
equally
significant too.
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