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Eating a balanced diet is the important step towards a healthy life.

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Food is a basic need of humans to live life and cloth and shelter are the other two. consumption of a balanced diet is the major aspect of a healthy life. There are major aspect related to this which is discussed in the upcoming paragraph along with supporting statements. To begin with, food is a basic need of the human body which help to work the body as well as it is working like a fule. Eating habits help to maintain a healthy life and it is also a source of energy and people get the vitamins and nutrition from their food. For example, in the modern world, the life pace is too fast and people have no time to eat proper food in these cases they try to take maximum nutrition from food Moving further, these days every person is very concise about their body structure and the balanced diet helps to give the perfect shape to a body which looks them attractive and smarter. It also feels the person confidential. An unbalanced diet increases the risk of health issues that may impact for a lifetime. For instant, humans have used to eat unhealthy food from the street shoops which is not good for health which may cause heart diseases, overweight and the other, etc. while humans balance the body by doing physical activities. To conclude, a balanced diet is a key of long and happy life and people should need to take the next step towards to maintain a healthy life
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people
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structure and the balanced diet
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which looks them attractive and smarter. It
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risk
of health issues that may impact for a lifetime. For instant,
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balance the
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by doing physical activities.

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people
should need to take the
next
step towards to maintain a healthy
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life
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IELTS essay Eating a balanced diet is the important step towards a healthy life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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