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Early financial education

Early financial education 0APKG

There are plenty of various opinions about financial education in the contemporary world. From the one side people believe in necessity of this knowledge from school ages, others have diverse thoughts. Moreover, huge amount of society even do not think about this. Nevertheless significance of these questions deserve special consideration. From my point of view students should learn how to survive financially as soon as possible. It is quite important for their future independent life. For instance, without understanding simple rules how to spend earned funds correctly, people could get hard financial situation, may be even with bad debts. The obligation to educate people with basic financial skills, I thought, should be organised by schools and universities. In conclusion, I want to state again that it is important to give financial education for people as soon as possible.

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people
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 significance of these questions deserve special consideration.

From my point of view students should learn how to survive financially
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important
 for their future independent life. For instance
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rules
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people
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get
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hard
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financial
 situation, may be even with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 debts.

The obligation to educate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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financial
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skills
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thought
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organised
 by schools and universities.

In conclusion
, I want to state again that it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to give You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscaleconomiccommercialmonetary
financial
 education for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. 