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Many people use customer reviews on the Internet to make decisions about what they buy. Are customer reviews the most useful tool to use when making a purchase?

Many people use customer reviews on the Internet to make decisions about what they buy. Are customer reviews the most useful tool to use when making a purchase? 2b7V6
Many people want to know what other buyer think about their purchases to realize the real rating of goods. I always try to find customers` feedbacks about the thing that I want to purchase, because it is the best way to not be cheated. Now I tell about why customer`s reviews is the most useful tool. Sometimes, we can be warned about unpredictable disadvantages of a purchase. Customer`s reviews may tell us about product`s charachteristics that were not included in official product`s discription. Recently, I made a mistake. I bought headphones at local shop and went to home. I had wanted to try on it at shop but, acctually, customers are not allowed to put on head headphones before they buy it, because it is against of rules of hygiene. Unfotunately, when I get home and turned music on through the headphones I realized that bass sounds are poor and the headphones were pressing on my head. I was upset more when I went on the websit of that shop and saw customer`s reviews. People wrote about the same problems. If only I had checked feedbacks before I bought that headphones, I would never have bought it. There are many websites contain only customer`s reviews in the World Wide Web. Some of these provide such feature as a customer chat. That chat allows you to ask details from people who already bougth the thing that you want to buy. An experience of customer is the most useful information that you can ever get. If a description of product does not contain charachteristic that you want to know, you can ask to people. Let me return to my headphones` issue. That shop refunded me and I started to look for headphones which I like. I went on specific website and when I found the model that may fit me, I asked people about quality of sound and real size of headphones. One user advised me to buy that model because headphones does not press on his head. He even told me the size of his head. I was defenetly glad when headphones fitted me. It is amazing that I can get such details from people who are not keen on to sell me something. In conclusion, I want to say that you can get much more information about product than shops show. Fortunately, we live in digital century and we should use perks of it. Use costomer`s reviews to get extended representaion of the things that you want to buy berfore you do it. I am asure that it is the most useful way to do shopping right.
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about their
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. I always try to find
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feedbacks about the thing that I
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customer`s
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reviews
is the most useful tool.

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, we can
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about unpredictable disadvantages of a
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purchase
.
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reviews
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us about
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charachteristics
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discription
. Recently, I made a mistake. I
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bought
headphones at local
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shop
and
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went to home
. I had wanted to try on it at
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shop
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but
,
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customers
are not
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to put on head headphones
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before
they
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it,
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because
it is against of
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rules
of hygiene.
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Unfotunately
, when I
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get
home and turned music on through the headphones I realized that bass sounds are poor and the headphones were pressing on my head. I
was upset
more when I went on the
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websit
of that
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shop
and
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saw
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customer`s
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reviews
.
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People
wrote about the same problems. If
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only
I had
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checked
feedbacks
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before
I
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bought
that headphones, I would never have
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There are
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websites contain
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customer`s
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reviews
in the World Wide Web.
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Some
of these provide such feature as a
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customer
chat. That chat
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allows
you to ask
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details
from
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people
who already
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bougth
the thing that you
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want
to
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buy
. An experience of
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customer
is the most useful information that you can ever
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get
. If a description of
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product
does not contain
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charachteristic
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want
to know, you can ask to
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people
.
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Let
me return to my headphones` issue. That
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shop
refunded me and I
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started
to look for headphones which I like. I went on specific website and when I found the model that may fit me, I asked
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people
about quality of sound and real size of headphones. One user advised me to
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buy
that model
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because
headphones does not press on his head. He even
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told
me the size of his head. I was
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defenetly
glad when headphones fitted me. It is amazing that I can
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get
such
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details
from
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people
who are not keen on to sell me something.

In conclusion
, I
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want
to say that you can
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get
much more information about
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product
than
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shops
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show
.
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, we
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live
in digital
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we should
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perks of it.
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costomer
`s
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reviews
to
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get
extended
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representaion
of the things that you
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want
to
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buy
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berfore
you do it. I am
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asure
that it is the most useful way to do shopping right.
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IELTS essay Many people use customer reviews on the Internet to make decisions about what they buy. Are customer reviews the most useful tool to use when making a purchase?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
437 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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