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Sleep in a quiet room or not.

Sleep in a quiet room or not. AjWbM

Sleep it's one of our basic needs. Everybody needs to sleep at least some hours every day to ensure their wellbeing. However every person has different ways and habits to sleep and not all can get into bed, close their eyes and automatically nod off till next day. Firstly, some people have severe problems to sleep and when they finally do it, they end waking for the slightly sound and get troubles to sleep again. Therefore they need a place like a quiet room or a bedroom with no noise and no light so they can go to sleep peacefully. Secondly, other people don't have that type of problem at all, they can sleep on a quiet room as well as noisy place and there is not gonna be any difference in their sleep schedule. Finally, I got use to sleep with a noisy background since I was a kid so I never care too much while I have a bed.

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