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E- waste is a major problem in many developing nations. what are causes and effects and offer some solutions

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Now a days, the development in technology is at its peak. Consequently the use of electronic devices has a great increase. Along with this, there is a hike in e-waste too in the country. Undoubtedly, there are many factors that contributes to this grave threat. Although there is no panacea for its evil consequences, it can be reduced up to a great extent by adopting some remedial measures. The most obvious cause of e-waste development is the production and sales of poor quality devices in the market. People in the country always prefer cheaper products over costly, where a few prefer for quality. Using these no quality products leads to the faster displacement of the commodities since they do not run long. With regards to this, dumping of low-grade items can be seen in the society this may cause several impact to the environment as well as for humans. For instance, there are different varieties of mobile phones available in the market for cheap prices why are the quality is inferior. The only remedy for this plague is to forward the selling of second grade items and strict monitoring should be ensured by the government. Another significant contribution is the lack of facilities for e-waste management. People struggled to clean out their e-wastes from their premises. Apparently, the individuals dispose them in landfills and non-disposable sites resulting in a great threat. Such disposal can lead to environmental issues as well as health problems to mankind. The chemicals which are extremely toxic and released from these devices altering the fertility of soil. Moreover, chronic diseases like cancer is can be developed in humans. A significant solution for this awful situation is nothing But implementing better and advanced technologies for the proper management of these items. Government should address it self to this matter. They should aware people about harmful effects of the same. Authorities concerned should take steps to designate drop off at some public places and ensure recycling facilities which can reduce the harmful effects on ecosystem and living beings. Apart from this, another course of this plague is the upgradation in the technology. Improvement in technology always attract people to buy new and latest products available in the market. This advancement in the technology leads to hike in number of non useable and old model electronic devices. This increase in the number is the great threat gifted by the developed the technology as well as improved human standard of life. People upgrading their mobile phones, even fans like iPhones are replaced twice a year is a case in point. The salt solution for this is that people should resell the phone or donate it to someone who might find it valuable. Exchange offers can be offered by some retailers for maximise the use of all the products. To encapsulate, betterment in technology is donating a wide variety of advanced and preferable number of electronic devices to the country which consequences in the top right of e-waste. Using substandard items as well as improper e-waste management system make the situation more worse. However, the problem can be dealt with some efficient solutions like, penalising no quality products, well-equipped e-waste management system and encouraging people to resell or donate the devices.
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is at its peak.
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great
increase. Along with this, there is a hike in e-waste too in the country.
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factors that contributes to this grave threat. Although there is no panacea for its evil consequences, it can be
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reduced
up to a
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great
extent by adopting
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some
remedial measures.

The most obvious cause of e-waste development is the production and sales of poor
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quality
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devices
in the market.
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People
in the country always prefer cheaper
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products
over costly, where a few prefer for
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quality
. Using these no
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quality
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products
leads to the faster displacement of the commodities since they do not run long.
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this, dumping of low-grade
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seen
in the society this may cause
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to the environment as
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as for humans.
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, there are
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different
varieties of mobile phones available in the market for
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cheap
prices why are the
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quality
is inferior. The
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only
remedy for this plague is to forward the selling of second grade
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items
and strict monitoring should
be ensured
by the
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government
.

Another significant contribution is the lack of facilities for e-waste
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management
.
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People
struggled to clean out their e-wastes from their premises.
Apparently
, the individuals dispose them in landfills and non-disposable sites resulting in a
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great
threat. Such disposal can lead to environmental issues as
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well
as health problems to mankind. The chemicals which are
extremely
toxic and released from these
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devices
altering the fertility of soil.
Moreover
, chronic diseases like cancer is can
be developed
in humans. A significant solution for this awful situation is nothing
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But
implementing better and advanced
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technologies
for the proper
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management
of these
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items
.
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Government
should address
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should aware
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people
about harmful effects of the same. Authorities concerned should take steps to designate drop off at
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some
public places and ensure recycling facilities which can
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reduce
the harmful effects on ecosystem and living beings.

Apart from this, another course of this plague is the
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upgradation
in the
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technology
. Improvement in
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technology
always attract
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people
to
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buy
new and latest
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products
available in the market. This advancement in the
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technology
leads to hike in number of
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non useable
and
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old
model electronic
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devices
. This increase in the number is the
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great
threat gifted by the developed the
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technology
as
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well
as
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improved
human standard of life.
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People
upgrading their mobile phones, even fans like iPhones
are replaced
twice a year is a case in point. The salt solution for this is that
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people
should resell the phone or donate it to someone who might find it valuable. Exchange offers can
be offered
by
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some
retailers for
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maximise
the
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use
of all the products.

To encapsulate, betterment in
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technology
is donating a wide variety of advanced and preferable number of electronic
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devices
to the country which consequences in the top right of e-waste. Using substandard
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items
as
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well
as improper e-waste
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management
system
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make
the situation
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more worse
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some
efficient solutions like,
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no
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quality
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products
, well-equipped e-waste
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management
system and encouraging
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people
to resell or donate the
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devices
.
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IELTS essay E- waste is a major problem in many developing nations. what are causes and effects and offer some solutions

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  American English
5 paragraphs
540 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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