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Some suggest that youths should take a job for a few years between school and university. Because, in my view, it’s to get ready for the big job after their university. It can be also to show their ability or to study and to work more to get more knowledgeable. Moreover, it's to save money before going to university. Regarding the advantages, it's can be a habit to know about the work environment. Also, it's a way to save money to get a chance to study at university.

Some suggest that youths should take a job for a few years between school and university. Because, in my view, it’s to get ready for the big job after their university. It can be also to show their ability or to study and to work more to get more knowledgeable. Moreover, it's to save money before going to university. Regarding the advantages, it's can be a habit to know about the work environment. Also, it's a way to save money to get a chance to study at university. 30jol

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