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Write an email to a friend in another city or country. Describe your city, and tell him or her to visit your city. Talk about the things that make your city great.

Write an email to a friend in another city or country. Describe your city, and tell him or her to visit your city. Talk about the things that make your city great. kx3ae
To Emma, Do you remember me? It's your penfriend - Vy. I heard you wanted to travelled somewhere right? I suggest you should come to my city. I grew up in Tay Ninh city do you remember that told you about 3 months ago? Here is some reason that you should come to my city. To begin with, my city have a lot of famous beauty spot. You told me you really loves beaty spot so why don't you go to my country? In addition, without the beauty spot you can enjoy the dishes with distinctive flavors that you can not find in somewhere else. Furthermore, the people are very hospitable because most of them are peasants. Not only that, they can speak english very well, so that you can communication with them. In conclusion, Tay Ninh city not a crowded city, It's a peace city. So you can come here like a travel to relax after hard days. If you come, you should text me back. Then we will make a plan more clearly where we should travel! I hope you reply soon! Love from Vy.
To Emma,

Do you remember me? It's your penfriend
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Vy
. I heard you wanted to
Did you mean "travel"?
travelled
somewhere right? I suggest you should
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come
to my city.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
grew up in
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Tay
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Ninh
city do you remember that
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told
you about 3 months ago? Here is
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some
reason that you should
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come
to my city. To
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begin
with, my city have
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a lot of
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famous
beauty spot. You
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told
me you
really
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loves
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beaty
spot
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so
why don't you go to my country?
In addition
, without the beauty spot you can enjoy the dishes with distinctive flavors that you can not find in somewhere else.
Furthermore
, the
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people
are
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very
hospitable
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because
most of them are peasants. Not
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only
that, they can speak
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english
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very
well,
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so
that you
The word 'communication' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can communication
with them.
In conclusion
,
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Tay
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Ninh
city not a crowded city, It's a peace city.
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So
you can
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come
here like
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "travel".
a travel
to relax after
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hard
days. If you
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come
, you should text me back. Then we will
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make
a plan more
clearly
where we should travel!

I hope you reply
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soon
!

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Love
from
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Vy
.
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IELTS essay Write an email to a friend in another city or country. Describe your city, and tell him or her to visit your city. Talk about the things that make your city great.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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