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Discuss Advantage and disadvantage of internet.

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Internet have changed the life of every living being of earth. Every coin have two sides. There are few downside of internet. Being so strong networking is killing the birds with the waves. The survey done by toronto university dr, muhamad shah 15000 found dead reported to forest department of ontario. Out of 89% are killed by the high rays emitted by internet device. On the other side, from early 90’s to till now. Internet have changed the world with ease of living. It have made life more secured. To clarify we now can order food while day caring my grandmother. Moreover internet have made extremely amazing way to provide the opportunities which no one ever thought. It allowed us to work from home. It really changed the working way we were doing from decades. To encapsulate, it is the way of living with hight advantages along the downside which already scientists are working on.
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changed
the life of every living being of earth. Every coin have two sides. There are
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few downside
of internet. Being
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strong networking is killing the birds with the waves. The survey done by
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toronto
university
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dr
,
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muhamad
shah 15000 found dead reported to forest department of
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ontario
. Out of 89%
are killed
by the high rays emitted by internet device. On the other side, from early
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90’s
to till
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now
. Internet have
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changed
the world with
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ease
of living. It
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have
made life more secured. To clarify we
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now
can order food while day caring my grandmother.
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Moreover
internet have made
extremely
amazing way to provide the opportunities which no one ever
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thought
. It
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allowed
us to work from home. It
really
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changed
the working way we were doing from decades. To encapsulate, it is the way of living with
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hight
advantages along the downside which already scientists are working on.

IELTS essay Discuss Advantage and disadvantage of internet.

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