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Drawbacks of living in the big city

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Living in the big city has many advantages such as it is modern, convenient and exciting. However, living in the big city also has many drawbacks. Firstly, traffic jams are among the most serious problems, there are many people and vehicles on the road. Especially in the rush hour people run out to work and school or get home from those places, that lead to the traffic jams. Secondly, air pollution is one of the drawbacks of living in the big city, that is negative for people’s health such as breathing problems, lung cancer, . . . . finally, that is noise pollution, it comes from machines, vehicles, ……. Therefore, living in the big city has many more drawbacks than you think.

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