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During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker? a serious attitude regarding thei v.1

During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker? a serious attitude regarding thei v. 1
Nowadays environmental pollution is a big concern to everyone. People from all over the world are somewhat aware of the issues regarding environmental damage. Mostly the pollution is done by the governments and big companies as a process of development. So, people are suggesting that they must work with each other to repair the damage they have done to restore the environment. I completely agree with them and this essay will discuss this issue in detail. In order to create a developed nation, every country has to go through some developmental activities and it is very difficult to do this without affecting our environment. For example, electricity is an important commodity for everyone, but power generation is not always environmentally friendly. Coal and gas fired power plants are detrimental to our surroundings. Governments and big companies may work together or individually to create those big power plants which will contaminate air and water with the generated waste material. A recent study conducted by the University of Cambridge has shown that Governments and big companies are responsible for 70% of environmental pollution worldwide. To make the matter worse in some cases, they are blaming each other instead of taking action to repair the damage. But not all companies and Governments are the same and in some cases they are working with each other to find a workable solution to mitigate the damage. For example, in the case of power generation, they can construct renewable power plants so that further deterioration of mother nature can be stopped. A research conducted by a group of scientists has found, that in some European countries where these two groups have worked together to repair the damage, the pollution has decreased by 25%. If they cooperate with each other, then the long term benefit can be achieved in near future. As environment is the most important factor that plays a massive impact in everyone’s life, it is the responsibility of every Governments and big companies to take adequate actions to restore the environment rather than blaming each other.
Nowadays environmental
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pollution
is a
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big
concern to everyone.
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People
from all over the world are somewhat aware of the issues regarding environmental
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damage
.
Mostly
the
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pollution
is done
by the
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governments
and
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big
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companies
as a process of development.
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So
,
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people
are suggesting that they
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must
work with each
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other
to repair the
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damage
they have done to restore the
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environment
. I completely
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agree
with them and this essay will discuss this issue in detail.

In order to create a developed nation, every country
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has to
go through
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some
developmental activities and it is
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very
difficult to do this without affecting our
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environment
.
For example
, electricity is an
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important
commodity for everyone,
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but
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power
generation is not always
environmentally
friendly. Coal and gas fired
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power
plants are detrimental to our surroundings.
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Governments
and
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big
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companies
may work together or
individually
to create those
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big
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power
plants which will contaminate air and water with the generated waste material. A recent study conducted by the University of Cambridge has shown that
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Governments
and
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big
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companies
are responsible for 70% of environmental
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pollution
worldwide. To
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make
the matter worse in
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some
cases, they are blaming each
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other
instead
of taking action to repair the damage.

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But
not all
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companies
and
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Governments
are the same and in
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some
cases they are working with each
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other
to find a
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workable
solution to mitigate the
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damage
.
For example
, in the case of
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power
generation, they can construct renewable
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power
plants
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so
that
further
deterioration of mother nature can be
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stopped
.
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A research
conducted by a group of scientists has found, that in
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some
European countries where these two groups have worked together to repair the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
damage
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
has decreased by 25%. If they cooperate with each
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other
, then the long term benefit can
be achieved
in near future.

As
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environment
is the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
factor that plays a massive impact in everyone’s life, it is the responsibility of every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "government"?
Governments
and
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big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
to take adequate actions to restore the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
rather
than blaming each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker? a serious attitude regarding thei v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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