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When I came across articles and videos of fish dying from waste in my country 5 years ago by accident, I was deeply saddened by those unethical actions. Just for some self-interest, but brutally robbed millions of creatures under the sea. Seeing the fishermen cry because their fish died, I was also very sad. because fish are the children that help them live on the land of the sea. If your unconsciousness has taken the lives of sea creatures, then you have also harmed your fellow human beings. I think you should treat your waste before discharging it into rivers, protecting the environment is protecting yourself.

When I came across articles and videos of fish dying from waste in my country 5 years ago by accident, I was deeply
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Just
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but
brutally
 robbed millions of creatures under the sea.

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because
 their fish This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
, I was also
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very
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because
 fish are the children that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 on the land of the sea. If your unconsciousness has taken the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of sea creatures, then you have also
 harmed your fellow human beings.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should treat your waste This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 discharging it into rivers, protecting the environment is protecting yourself. 